Awesome fic! I loved the outside POV, and the little hints of what the people of Pegasus actually think about the Lanteans after five years. I love the Black Colonel idea. It's very fitting of John when people (or wraith, or replicators) threaten his home.
I also loved all the OCs. Janelle, who gets to see why the Lanteans are exactly like in the stories, but then, really not. I also loved little Torren, he made a really nice light-hearted addition to the story.
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Date: 2009-08-21 11:59 am (UTC)I also loved all the OCs. Janelle, who gets to see why the Lanteans are exactly like in the stories, but then, really not. I also loved little Torren, he made a really nice light-hearted addition to the story.