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Date: 2005-10-02 08:18 pm (UTC)
Really liked how his friends tried to help in their own ways -- Ronon with food, Zelenka with equations.

That he never would be ready, ever again, went unspoken.

Ouch. The part that got me most was Rodney's feeling that something was missing in him, something had been taken and he wasn't himself anymore.

"I'm so sorry, Rodney," he said finally. His voice was rougher, softer than normal. Sandpaper on stone.

Lovely. John would feel responsible and hurt for Rodney.

I was smart and strong and capable and I still ended up like that. I got taken.

Wonderful to have Cadman being able to identify with what Rodney was going through, to reach out to him in a way he could accept.

John came over, touched his shoulder briefly, carefully, on a place where there hadn't been any bruises.

Love John's care. The ending gave me hope that Rodney was taking the first steps to recovery. Beautifully done.

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