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Date: 2005-10-13 08:13 pm (UTC)
Oh ye gods, I just finished dinner, am full to the brim, and despite that reading this made me hungry and want to eat and oh just so willing to experience the wonder of taste, of smell, yet again that it's nearly embarassing. *groans* Now my stomach is full and yet I'm hungry; what do I do with that?!

Seriously - really, really, really good food description. McKay's reaction so fitting, beautiful even, and the whole concept, idea, is original on one hand, on the other appropriate and sensible, and so something we could have, and should have, seen in the series.

Just one thing - you seem to be missing something here: "catch up to him before [??] did something"

*whimpers* I'm hungry now...
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