MVP

Date: 2006-04-03 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Wow! I loved it! Such insightful and psychologically captivating story. I truly love these details, that exploration of the human psyche. And the love story was great. I was a bit perturbed at first by the peculiar sexual drive of John though. He did seem awfully earnest to supply anything his partner wanted and I wondered if he would have self-esteem issues. So sad to see something like that in a charming and kind guy as him... but then I understood he was searching something which anchored him. All his recklessness and kamikaze complex were just the lack of someone who really care, were not? Your portrait of him as someone so inherently needy is brilliant, however. I never before had seen a John like yours and I liked him like this. Sheppard is often so in control of himself and his surrounds. It is great see entirely another view of him. So ripe to a shot of hurt and comfort, what is another favorite of mine. You rock, girl! Also, interesting the talk between Elizabeth and Rodney when she congratulate him and says he is invaluable to Atlantis and the mission. He is, but I am with Rodney when he say John is it too. And hint no so subtlety how he is send to dangerous missions because she and all others know John is a kamikaze. I did not note so disregard for John safety in the show but it was a great point in this story and I loved when Rodney points it to Elizabeth and she become shocked. Go Rodney! I would liked read that Elizabeth had to say to it, though. But this was a great story, all in all. It was a very emotive and profound tale and I enjoyed very much. Thanks for share it with us. PD: Oh! What was the title MVP all about? What for it stand? I am curious...
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