This piece just grabbed me by the guts: I was practically holding my breath.
I've noticed a lot of the other comments asking for more, which I'd like as well, but if lengthening it is intimidating, what about turning it into a small series of related vignettes? Because it does stand on its own, but other pieces could be tied in.
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Date: 2006-03-23 01:12 am (UTC)I've noticed a lot of the other comments asking for more, which I'd like as well, but if lengthening it is intimidating, what about turning it into a small series of related vignettes? Because it does stand on its own, but other pieces could be tied in.