All the jumping around in Rodney's mind felt exactly like (what I think) a distressed and confused version of his normal thought processes should be like. The intrusion of the present into his confused flashes of memory came through very clearly.
Relief! Seriously, I was worried it wouldn't come through, but the response has been really positive, so that makes me feel much better about it and as a writer in general. To say something feels *possible* is a huge compliment. Thanks. *hugs*
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Date: 2006-05-08 06:03 pm (UTC)Relief! Seriously, I was worried it wouldn't come through, but the response has been really positive, so that makes me feel much better about it and as a writer in general. To say something feels *possible* is a huge compliment. Thanks. *hugs*