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Date: 2008-10-01 02:45 am (UTC)
What a wonderfully moving piece. Virgin John was completely believable given the background you gave for him. Both John and Rodney were in character and the flow of their dialogue was excellent. I felt so much for John, completely identifying with his situation. I am very glad to have read it. Thank-you for posting.
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