"Hey, don't stop," he whispered when Ronon had to pause and look at him, because inside, Ronon shouted with joy and power and lightning, because they changed each other.
Guh! This is just an absolutely gorgeous story. You really capture that feeling of knowing something about you has changed significantly, where you feel it so strongly, and are so stunned that it's not obvious to everyone else.
I loved Ronon's mental comparison of his first time with Kell and his first time with Sheppard. And I also really enjoyed the team feel to the opening. Sheppard saying "Whoa, kid, don't aim for the head!" made me grin.
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Date: 2006-06-05 03:05 pm (UTC)Guh! This is just an absolutely gorgeous story. You really capture that feeling of knowing something about you has changed significantly, where you feel it so strongly, and are so stunned that it's not obvious to everyone else.
I loved Ronon's mental comparison of his first time with Kell and his first time with Sheppard. And I also really enjoyed the team feel to the opening. Sheppard saying "Whoa, kid, don't aim for the head!" made me grin.
Excellent fic.