{{{shudders}}} You've deftly tapped into nightmare material: being buried alive, the charnal fields and a destination that never seems to get any closer no matter how long you travel to it. Rodney's right--*years* of therapy. I love that you were able to give us a story that tapped into the darkness within and out, and it works. Gorgeous, bleak and horrifying.
I might not come back and read this again, but once was surely enough to wreck my sleep for weeks!
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Date: 2006-07-27 10:46 am (UTC)I might not come back and read this again, but once was surely enough to wreck my sleep for weeks!