Your right about the fibres but I actually wasn't planning on having Miko die by being suffocated. I actually subconsciously had a more public accidental death in mind so they wouldn't bother looking to deeply into her death. Since I read your comment I though about exactly how she was going to die and wrote it. This will be in the final version when it comes back from beta.
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Miko regained consciousness with a pounding headache and moaned softly. She was still alive. They didn’t kill her after all. As she pushed herself up into a sitting position. Just as her hand brushed against an object sitting on the table she heard Dr. McKay shout, “Don’t touch that!”
An ominous click emerged from the Ancient device on the table beside. She looked down, recognizing it as the device she had been studying yesterday. Her brown eyes widened in fear just as her body was shocked with serge of energy. The fried husk of her body fell to the floor with a sickening thump. “Oh God,” Simpson whispered and rushed to the nearby waste basket and threw up. Rodney shook his head sadly, "Why did she do that? She was such a good scientist and it is hard to find good, reliable scientists like her."
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Well, I hoped that worked better for you and thanks for the comment. :)
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Miko regained consciousness with a pounding headache and moaned softly. She was still alive. They didn’t kill her after all. As she pushed herself up into a sitting position. Just as her hand brushed against an object sitting on the table she heard Dr. McKay shout, “Don’t touch that!”
An ominous click emerged from the Ancient device on the table beside. She looked down, recognizing it as the device she had been studying yesterday. Her brown eyes widened in fear just as her body was shocked with serge of energy. The fried husk of her body fell to the floor with a sickening thump. “Oh God,” Simpson whispered and rushed to the nearby waste basket and threw up. Rodney shook his head sadly, "Why did she do that? She was such a good scientist and it is hard to find good, reliable scientists like her."
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Well, I hoped that worked better for you and thanks for the comment. :)