This was lovely -- I particularly like the three days- three weeks - three months - etc symmetry. And the way that Teyla dealt with being shunned by the Athosians, with everything, struck me as very Teyla. It's nice to see a story in this challenge that doesn't automatically equate superpowers with improvement -- the darker side, as it were. Thank you for this!
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Date: 2006-08-05 10:49 pm (UTC)