Okay, I have to explain that the whole time I was reading this, my daughter was grabbing my arm and my husband was hovering over me, and I was pushing them away with one hand while I scrolled down with the other. I *had* to know what was going to happen.
I love the way we gradually figure out something is weird and what's weird and what's going on. And the ending is perfect! (I would also like to thank you for putting in an explanation of why she repeats their dialogue exactly. Most people wouldn't have thought of that, and it would have bugged me!)
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Date: 2006-09-03 12:43 pm (UTC)Okay, I have to explain that the whole time I was reading this, my daughter was grabbing my arm and my husband was hovering over me, and I was pushing them away with one hand while I scrolled down with the other. I *had* to know what was going to happen.
I love the way we gradually figure out something is weird and what's weird and what's going on. And the ending is perfect! (I would also like to thank you for putting in an explanation of why she repeats their dialogue exactly. Most people wouldn't have thought of that, and it would have bugged me!)