First: Bwhahahahahahahaha! OMG, I laughed out loud about a dozen times while reading this. You did such a nice job with the tone and style of this - almost like "Behind the Music" or a documentary. The level of meta was fantastic - I loved the way you wove all of the various characters and plot notes together. Really fun and hilarious.
Second: Nobody Resists: Nobody Gets Hurt . I will love you forever for that.
Third: The only quibble I'd have is that I realy wanted to see scenes among the guys. I know that wouldn't work with the detached narrator style, but I really, really, really wanted those scenes. I'm impressed that you were able to get so much of the boys' personalities across even without them.
This is hilarious, and I'm really glad I got to read it.
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Date: 2006-11-20 07:37 pm (UTC)Second: Nobody Resists: Nobody Gets Hurt . I will love you forever for that.
Third: The only quibble I'd have is that I realy wanted to see scenes among the guys. I know that wouldn't work with the detached narrator style, but I really, really, really wanted those scenes. I'm impressed that you were able to get so much of the boys' personalities across even without them.
This is hilarious, and I'm really glad I got to read it.