It was so well written that I could hear the screams too, its giving me goosbumps. And I had to just move because it felt like the burning was real. I especially loved John franticness, and Teyla and Ronon's reaction to that. and how Rodney's been during and after (how he tries to ignore the stares, and how he took the defensive near the end) and how everything goes back to normal later, almost.
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Date: 2006-11-24 01:12 am (UTC)It was so well written that I could hear the screams too, its giving me goosbumps. And I had to just move because it felt like the burning was real.
I especially loved John franticness, and Teyla and Ronon's reaction to that. and how Rodney's been during and after (how he tries to ignore the stares, and how he took the defensive near the end) and how everything goes back to normal later, almost.
yes, very good, it all felt too real.