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Date: 2006-12-09 01:13 am (UTC)
Oogle. Rarble. Sprble. Incoherence.

Stick-figure-Teyla-pregnant-with-stick-baby! Squee!

And, because I spent too much time as a beta-reader for my sins, I noticed that
"I'd be kind of worried about your dick sticking in my ass spread Manipulator gets a little gluey after a while."

seems to need a punctuation mark somewhere in there.

Oh, and the ending. The ending. Wow.
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