You're missing, and I hate you by Midvacent (Missing Persons challenge)

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Title: You're missing, and I hate you
Author: Midvacent
Rating: G
Pairing: Mcshep
Summary: I will walk the empty halls alone
Type: Poem
A/N: Thank you to the lovely natasie, my friend and confident, for always being there.




You’re missing, and I hate you.
I hate you for it; I'm here and you're gone,
And I’m just supposed to carry on?
So I will wait, nervous, tense.
I’ll talk until I don’t make sense.

You're not here, and I miss you.

You’re missing, and I hate you.
I will look and search for an answer,
I will work to find you until I die of cancer.
I’ll write the patterns on the wall,
Pour my heart out in an untidy scrawl.

You're not here, and I want you.

You’re missing, and I hate you.
You and I spent all our time here,
But you just refuse to reappear.
So I'll walk the empty halls alone,
Wishing and hoping that you will come home.

You’re not here, and I need you.

You’re missing, and I hate you.
I hate you have to play the hero,
And leave me with just my ones and zeros.
You play the champion and fade away,
Tonight I actually prayed that you would see another day.

You're not here, and I think... I love you.

Please, just please, come home.

Comments

[seratonation.livejournal.com]

awwwwww, so heartbreaking, about writing on the walls, and walking alone, and searching till he dies of cancer (so McKay) and actually Praying. I love the last line, and its cool how you got everything to rhyme (I hope thats spelled right)

[midvacent.livejournal.com]

Aw, Thank you. (and it is spelled right) *biggrin*

[pre-expansion.livejournal.com]

I think this is a very creative way of doing this challenge. Kinda like someones frantic, desperate thoughts. Good job!

[midvacent.livejournal.com]

Exactly, thank you!