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Date: 2007-04-05 10:11 pm (UTC)
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Excellent story.

I loved the mystery of what was wrong with Rodney, how it gradually became clearer that he was missing parts and that the rest of the team had been there, that John was drugged and put in a harem. All very vague, yet enough to tell me it was bad.

A silent Rodney would truly be alarming and he relies so *much* on his words that it must be very frustrating for him. I'm glad Carson's got a regeneration machine and that John's there to help take his mind off things.

I loved John in this too, how he didn't push Rodney to make the half-noises he was capable of, how he kept his own silence as well and made it all dreamy and surreal, let Rodney know his feelings simply through his careful and thorough touch. All very hot and sensual.

Laura.
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