I love this. It's such a beautiful portrait of Miko and how she's changed, both by Atlantis and then by going back to Earth.
I really like the paragraph with the leggings and legwarmers--there are so many things packed into that one paragraph that it gives such a great sense of standing in the middle of a busy city, being overwhelmed by so many noises and flashing lights and people around you.
(no subject)
Date: 2007-04-22 11:23 am (UTC)I really like the paragraph with the leggings and legwarmers--there are so many things packed into that one paragraph that it gives such a great sense of standing in the middle of a busy city, being overwhelmed by so many noises and flashing lights and people around you.