Oh, I loved this. I think my favorite part was the mathematical equation slowly beginning to dawn on John's waking mind, even though his body seemed to instinctively get it. Like the whole of the story in concentrate--the way John was taking all the physical steps weeks or months before his mind turned to examine what he'd done.
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Date: 2007-05-22 10:05 pm (UTC)Wonderful--thank you!