Oh, I'm so glad you liked both the world and the structure of the story! If we were writing the story again, we might be in a bot more description of Shon're, but then again there's been a lot of sexswitch fic that has focused on what a female!John looks like already. In any case, thank you so much for your feedback - we're both very glad you enjoyed the story!
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Date: 2007-05-23 06:49 pm (UTC)