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Date: 2005-04-14 10:22 pm (UTC)
ext_841: (invulnerable)
oh, i really liked, esp. the real threat and horror and creepiness and the ending is hot and the final silence and the imagery with the arms and the movement and not being tied any more...but, i feel like i missed a step. were they involved before? b/c he calls him major in his thoughts. but if they weren't... well, i'll put it down to post-mortal danger honesty and release and the wrapping image nicely connects... hmmm...
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