Wow, amazing job! You got the poetic form down *and* it sounds like Rodney! Very nicely done!
I think I probably skipped this the first time because I don't normally read fic that's in the form of poetry or song lyrics because, not to put too fine a point on it, most people's attempts are goddawful. This, however, is very, very good, so kudos to you for proving my prejudices unfounded! *g*
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Date: 2007-12-30 11:38 pm (UTC)I think I probably skipped this the first time because I don't normally read fic that's in the form of poetry or song lyrics because, not to put too fine a point on it, most people's attempts are goddawful. This, however, is very, very good, so kudos to you for proving my prejudices unfounded! *g*