This was really beautiful. We are our worst enemies and thus would inflict the worst type of punishment in any given situation. It was very insightful, each team members' own personal hell, a fear or mistake to relive over and over again.
Rodney's showcased his loneliness, Teyla's was just plain scary and Ronon's so very sad. I'm glad Rodney was able to break them all out. I can believe that John would think his was real, he carries the burden of responsibly so heavily on his shoulders, the shed a manifestation of one of his darkest hours.
What I really liked was the shed was a nightmare, Holland died there but John was never a POW. That is so realistic, many writers like to make John some ex-POW, where in reality in terms of Afghanistan those statics are so very, very rare.
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Date: 2007-10-01 03:08 am (UTC)Rodney's showcased his loneliness, Teyla's was just plain scary and Ronon's so very sad. I'm glad Rodney was able to break them all out. I can believe that John would think his was real, he carries the burden of responsibly so heavily on his shoulders, the shed a manifestation of one of his darkest hours.
What I really liked was the shed was a nightmare, Holland died there but John was never a POW. That is so realistic, many writers like to make John some ex-POW, where in reality in terms of Afghanistan those statics are so very, very rare.
This was a wonderful team fic.