sixty-eight whiskey by 2ndary_author (first aid challenge)

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Title: Sixty-Eight Whiskey
Author: 2ndary_author
Fandom: Stargate: Atlantis
Characters: Sheppard, OC
Rating: PG-15
Words: 1, 423
Notes: for the First Aid challenge, epigraph by Orison Marden. (yes, I resisted the urge to cheat and repost this)

Summary: SGC's personnel review and new-hire interview/orientation

Comments

[panisdead.livejournal.com]

Now I want to see Hawley on the show. ♥

[2ndary-author.livejournal.com]

Not that I don't love the regular, long-suffering medical staff (I haven't seen too much of Keller, but Beckett is still alive as far as my fiction is concerned), but a little smartassery is good for the soul! Thanks for commenting:)

[julia-here.livejournal.com]

Yes, please, someday the rest of Hawley's story?

Julia, because it sounds like he and Sheppard are a closely matched pair

[2ndary-author.livejournal.com]

haha, yes, maybe there will be a future installment in which Sheppard learns just how obnoxious it is to command someone just like him;). Thanks for commenting.

[goddess47]

Ah! Thanks for the link to the other story, that is just as cool...

Hawley sounds interesting, as does his backstory that maybe we will hear some day.... good job!

[2ndary-author.livejournal.com]

I really did think about posting it and seeing if anyone noticed ("hey...I read something a lot like this once..."), but then Hawley appeared on the horizon. Glad you liked it!

[fanficfan.livejournal.com]

Taut and engrossing. The interplay of back story with interview works well. Thanks.

[linziday.livejournal.com]

Lovely! I love Hawley.

[shalom]

You drew a very compelling and interesting character there. Great work.

[incidental-fire.livejournal.com]

Interesting character and an interesting read. It would be interesting to see him and Sheppard actually interacting. Heh.

[xparrot.livejournal.com]

A sharp, vivid portrait sketched in only a handful of words, and I like the view of Sheppard, perceptive but still learning. Nicely done.

[eliyes.livejournal.com]

Ooh! I love it when people make OCs I'd be happy to see on the show. Hawley's great. :D

[cathexys.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love the way there are entire epics in those few brief allusions you offer us. Wonderfully done!

[springwoof.livejournal.com]

very nice! I liked your OC very much. and I liked the view of Sheppard: wiser, weary, and "older than expected"

[deaka.livejournal.com]

Really enjoyed this. Your OC is well-realised and very interesting. Loved the way that Sheppard was casual about almost every question except the one about the medical side of things - says a lot about how protective he is of his people. :D Wonderful work!

[dr-dredd.livejournal.com]

Shep will finally get his comeuppance. He'll get from Hawley what he always gave to his own CO's!