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Title: Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts (26k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: McShep
Summary: John gets a do-over.

Thanks to shalott, giddy, and res for beta beyond the call of duty.

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Date: 2006-06-22 06:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] devildoll.livejournal.com
This is such a great premise, and you did a great job with John's voice after his little swim, how he still sounded like himself but just different enough.

Also this line:

Rodney hissed softly, and, God, yes, the years had passed while Rodney had been working; the stream of time had dragged Rodney down and battered him against its own sort of rocks, and now it had brought him to John, gasping for breath and brand new.

is pure perfection, and made me all emo. I love the parallel.

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