On the Brink by simonesimone Earthside Challenge

[simonesimone.livejournal.com]

Title: On the Brink
Author: simonesimone
Pairings: MCSHEP!
Rating: NC-17
Spoilers: Vaguely season two.
Summary: This is a monstrous story.  It didn't fit in one post.  I...am ashamed.  That being said it has consumed more hours of my life than I am comfortable disclosing, and it and I are DONE!  So sorry for the mistakes, and I hope you enjoy anyway!

"Oh my GOD!  I do not believe you just said that to me!"
(...And Part Two)

Comments

[liviapenn.livejournal.com]

Simone-- flashfic needs to be posted to the community, not to your own journal. It's in the community info. You should probably edit your post, or else the mods might delete it for you.

[simonesimone.livejournal.com]

Because of the length of the story I couldn't post it here in one post, and the userinfo says in that case a link to the story may be used. Sorry if I made a mistake! If one of the mods has further instructions, I'll be happy to fix anything that needs to be done.

[liviapenn.livejournal.com]

OMG, how embarrassing (for me). I shouldn't have said anything!

Anyway, I read the story and I liked it a lot. Deatti was adorable, and I love how all the different parts of the story fit together in the end. It was almost like a "movie version" of Atlantis the TV show, in that it had all the same stuff that I love about the show, but felt like the world had almost expanded outwards, with lots of interesting, original stuff added in-- the creepy dreamworld and the waterparks and castles and everything. I loved all your different settings. And the sex was hawt. *G*

I notice you don't have any icons, would you like some? Let me know if you'd like anything, I feel like a real jerk for lecturing you. *G*

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

Livia: you're cute when you're contrite.

Simonesimone: You wrote another fic! I am so happy. Alas, I cannot read SGA until after the World Cup as my brain is consumed by football. *bookmarks to del.icio.us*

[simonesimone.livejournal.com]

So does that mean a month of abstinence? Because that's intense...

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

So does that mean a month of abstinence? Because that's intense...

Yup. Football is always intense.

I am consumed by football rps. Consumed. So I am not really abstinent at all, *g*

[lobelia321.livejournal.com]

So does that mean a month of abstinence? Because that's intense...
Abstinence?? It was post-Cup that the abstinence set in! I am reeling with withdrawal (and it's only been three days!). Football is the total slash and teh ultimate hot.

Um. Look: have a cross-over icon! (I am currently writing McKay/Cristiano Ronaldo. It makes sense in my head.) *g*

Okay, What's wrong with the world

[aliencowgrrl.livejournal.com]

Seriously, After six years, I'm de-lurking to comment on this story. It's good, in fact your John Shepard slinked right into my head, is currently shredding old rags and papers making himself a little nest. The dude is staying. I'm off to reread, even thought I have a million pressing tasks and I'm sorry you don't have the thousands of "Oh pretty sparkly fic" comments you deserve. This is good, long and with plot, plus the whole water park, I love it. Thanks

Re: Okay, What's wrong with the world

[simonesimone.livejournal.com]

Thank you LOTS, that comment made my day. Glad you enjoyed it :)

[rusty-armour.livejournal.com]

What a fabulous story, simonesimone! I've been having kind of a crappy day and this fic really cheered me up! It was funny, angsty and emotionally powerful. I loved the whole struggle McKay and Sheppard went through to get together. I think this is one of those stories where the journey is just as fulfilling as the end result. I'll definitely be saving this on my hard drive. :-)

[simonesimone.livejournal.com]

I'm glad it cheered you up--I've been having a crappy week and it kind of cheered *me* up (especially all the great comments). Thank you!

[lyl-devil.livejournal.com]

Ok, I seriously loved this story. I adore reading long fics, especially ones that contain all the good stuff (action, humour, angst, sex...). This sucked me right in. Beautifully done. :)

"...Do they not have common sense, where you come from?"

"It's not that we don't have it," Rodney replied, "it's just that, where we come from, most people feel it's optional."

So true....great line. ;-)

[kuonji14.livejournal.com]

I think I liked the first part best, with the sand and the bears. "Did you find me yet?" lol, This line cracked me up even as I felt relieved Rodney was safe:

I liked Deatti and the planet of the purple flower weeds. John's experience in the coma was very interesting.

A bit of crit: The story seemed a bit meandering, with too many mini-parts and mini-themes to it for my taste. I wish I could describe better what I mean, but my brain isn't very coherant right now. I did like the fic overall, though. Thanks.