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About 35 minutes writing and the rest doing a tidy-up to it :-)
This was first conceived of in a conversation between myself,
alyse and
davechicken in a 'Wouldn't it be funny if...' kind of way. This is the result.
Title: Thank The Sun
Author: Claire
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Summary: "And you didn't think to tell us..."
Thank The Sun
by Claire
This was it; the day they'd been waiting for. After five years, Atlantis would once more welcome people from Earth.
For three years Rodney McKay and his science team had been working on the solar energy cells that had been discovered in an abandoned section of the city. After only a few weeks, they'd been able to generate enough energy to send and receive compressed data bursts. Since then, they'd been in constant communication, data travelling between Atlantis and Earth on a weekly basis.
Then three weeks ago Rodney and Radek Zelenka had burst into the control room declaring that they'd done it. They'd managed to stabilize the cells enough to enable them to reach full power. Two weeks of charging, and there was enough power in Atlantis to hold either an outgoing or an incoming wormhole stretching between the Pegasus Galaxy and the Milky Way. And now they were just waiting.
"Incoming wormhole," Peter Grodin's voice rang through the control room as the Stargate began to engage. "Receiving IDC. It's the SGC."
Elizabeth Weir glanced at him, nodding. "Lower the iris, Peter."
A few seconds later the wormhole burst from the Stargate and Elizabeth felt herself holding her breath. Felt herself holding it right up until the first figure stepped through the 'Gate.
Unable to hear anything but her heart pounding, she stepped forward. "General O'Neill, it's good to see you."
"O'Neill-Jackson now, actually," the General replied, smiling and taking her hand in his.
"O'Neill-Jackson?" Elizabeth felt her eyes drop to the General's nametag, and then to the nametag of the man standing next to him. "And Dr Jackson-O'Neill?"
Daniel Jackson-O'Neill nodded, just about to answer her when John Sheppard stepped forward, hand waving in a gesture she'd seen from Rodney McKay more than once.
"Wait a minute," Sheppard said. "O'Neill-Jackson? Jackson-O'Neill?
General O'Neill Jackson tensed. "Yes?" he said, face blank.
Sheppard continued to wave. "Well, I mean, you know…" he trailed off.
"Know what, Major?" Daniel asked.
"Don't ask, don't tell!" John exclaimed.
"Oh that?" The General shrugged. "Got rid of that a couple of years ago."
"And you didn't think to tell us?!"
Daniel looked at John. "I'm pretty sure we did."
"No, you didn't." Rodney stepped forward as he agreed with John. "You most definitely didn't."
"Are you sure?" Daniel asked.
"You think Rodney and I would have spent the last two years sneaking about if you had told us?" John's eyes widened as he realised what he said. "Not that we snuck around," he back-pedalled quickly as he turned to face Elizabeth. "Because that would be wrong."
Elizabeth held up a hand, placatingly. "John, calm down. I already knew."
"You knew?" Rodney subconsciously closed the distance between him and John. "How?"
"Well, it was pretty obvious when you asked for adjoining quarters," Zelenka commented. "With a shared balcony."
Rodney looked at him. "You knew, too." His eyes narrowed suspiciously. "Who else?"
Grodin held up a hand. As did Bates. And Ford. And Teyla. And after a few seconds, the entire population of the GateRoom, barring those who had just stepped through from Earth, had their hands in the air.
"But, we were careful!" John exclaimed.
"Oh, please," Bates said. "Having your hand on McKay's thigh all the way through movie night is not 'careful'."
"And that thing where you keep ending up in Rodney's shirts? Come on, Major. I mean, the excuse about getting the laundry mixed up was barely acceptable the first time, never mind the seventh," Elizabeth pointed out, pausing as she suddenly realised something. "That's why you got the entire Canadian Immigration website sent through a few months ago."
Rodney turned to John in surprise. "You looked into emigrating to Canada?"
"Damn right," answered John. "I took the test and everything, Passed with flying colours, too," he said proudly. "Including the test for entry into the Canadian Air Force."
"You didn't need to," Rodney said. "Marrying a Canadian automatically gives you citizenship. They'd have to take you."
"Marriage?" John asked.
"Yes," replied Rodney.
John paused for a moment. "Was that a proposal?"
Rodney glanced around, as if he'd only just realised everyone was watching them. "What if it is?"
"I might just say yes," answered John carefully.
"Okay," Rodney said. "I guess that was a proposal, then."
"I guess *that* was a yes, then," John said.
The two of them stared at each other for a long moment, before suddenly moving, lips clashing together in a fierce kiss.
Elizabeth turned back to the group from the SGC, most of who were pointedly ignoring the head of the Science Department and the head of the Military Contingency heavily making out behind her.
"Just like home," muttered Colonel Samantha Carter, meeting Elizabeth's eyes and smiling.
Seeing the amusement in the other woman's gaze, Elizabeth felt herself relax. "Welcome to Atlantis," she said, as she let the grin she'd been feeling finally come to her face.
End.
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Title: Thank The Sun
Author: Claire
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Summary: "And you didn't think to tell us..."
Thank The Sun
by Claire
This was it; the day they'd been waiting for. After five years, Atlantis would once more welcome people from Earth.
For three years Rodney McKay and his science team had been working on the solar energy cells that had been discovered in an abandoned section of the city. After only a few weeks, they'd been able to generate enough energy to send and receive compressed data bursts. Since then, they'd been in constant communication, data travelling between Atlantis and Earth on a weekly basis.
Then three weeks ago Rodney and Radek Zelenka had burst into the control room declaring that they'd done it. They'd managed to stabilize the cells enough to enable them to reach full power. Two weeks of charging, and there was enough power in Atlantis to hold either an outgoing or an incoming wormhole stretching between the Pegasus Galaxy and the Milky Way. And now they were just waiting.
"Incoming wormhole," Peter Grodin's voice rang through the control room as the Stargate began to engage. "Receiving IDC. It's the SGC."
Elizabeth Weir glanced at him, nodding. "Lower the iris, Peter."
A few seconds later the wormhole burst from the Stargate and Elizabeth felt herself holding her breath. Felt herself holding it right up until the first figure stepped through the 'Gate.
Unable to hear anything but her heart pounding, she stepped forward. "General O'Neill, it's good to see you."
"O'Neill-Jackson now, actually," the General replied, smiling and taking her hand in his.
"O'Neill-Jackson?" Elizabeth felt her eyes drop to the General's nametag, and then to the nametag of the man standing next to him. "And Dr Jackson-O'Neill?"
Daniel Jackson-O'Neill nodded, just about to answer her when John Sheppard stepped forward, hand waving in a gesture she'd seen from Rodney McKay more than once.
"Wait a minute," Sheppard said. "O'Neill-Jackson? Jackson-O'Neill?
General O'Neill Jackson tensed. "Yes?" he said, face blank.
Sheppard continued to wave. "Well, I mean, you know…" he trailed off.
"Know what, Major?" Daniel asked.
"Don't ask, don't tell!" John exclaimed.
"Oh that?" The General shrugged. "Got rid of that a couple of years ago."
"And you didn't think to tell us?!"
Daniel looked at John. "I'm pretty sure we did."
"No, you didn't." Rodney stepped forward as he agreed with John. "You most definitely didn't."
"Are you sure?" Daniel asked.
"You think Rodney and I would have spent the last two years sneaking about if you had told us?" John's eyes widened as he realised what he said. "Not that we snuck around," he back-pedalled quickly as he turned to face Elizabeth. "Because that would be wrong."
Elizabeth held up a hand, placatingly. "John, calm down. I already knew."
"You knew?" Rodney subconsciously closed the distance between him and John. "How?"
"Well, it was pretty obvious when you asked for adjoining quarters," Zelenka commented. "With a shared balcony."
Rodney looked at him. "You knew, too." His eyes narrowed suspiciously. "Who else?"
Grodin held up a hand. As did Bates. And Ford. And Teyla. And after a few seconds, the entire population of the GateRoom, barring those who had just stepped through from Earth, had their hands in the air.
"But, we were careful!" John exclaimed.
"Oh, please," Bates said. "Having your hand on McKay's thigh all the way through movie night is not 'careful'."
"And that thing where you keep ending up in Rodney's shirts? Come on, Major. I mean, the excuse about getting the laundry mixed up was barely acceptable the first time, never mind the seventh," Elizabeth pointed out, pausing as she suddenly realised something. "That's why you got the entire Canadian Immigration website sent through a few months ago."
Rodney turned to John in surprise. "You looked into emigrating to Canada?"
"Damn right," answered John. "I took the test and everything, Passed with flying colours, too," he said proudly. "Including the test for entry into the Canadian Air Force."
"You didn't need to," Rodney said. "Marrying a Canadian automatically gives you citizenship. They'd have to take you."
"Marriage?" John asked.
"Yes," replied Rodney.
John paused for a moment. "Was that a proposal?"
Rodney glanced around, as if he'd only just realised everyone was watching them. "What if it is?"
"I might just say yes," answered John carefully.
"Okay," Rodney said. "I guess that was a proposal, then."
"I guess *that* was a yes, then," John said.
The two of them stared at each other for a long moment, before suddenly moving, lips clashing together in a fierce kiss.
Elizabeth turned back to the group from the SGC, most of who were pointedly ignoring the head of the Science Department and the head of the Military Contingency heavily making out behind her.
"Just like home," muttered Colonel Samantha Carter, meeting Elizabeth's eyes and smiling.
Seeing the amusement in the other woman's gaze, Elizabeth felt herself relax. "Welcome to Atlantis," she said, as she let the grin she'd been feeling finally come to her face.
End.
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Date: 2005-04-05 08:25 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-06 07:14 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-05 08:35 pm (UTC)That SO needed writing.
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Date: 2005-04-06 07:15 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-05-01 01:42 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-05-01 01:53 pm (UTC)My icon likes you too.
the muse...
Date: 2005-04-05 08:40 pm (UTC)I think it ROCKS!
Re: the muse...
Date: 2005-04-06 07:16 pm (UTC)::glomps the Shep::
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Date: 2005-04-05 08:41 pm (UTC)Does that mean I have to write mine now?
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Date: 2005-04-06 07:16 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-05 09:12 pm (UTC)*dies*
This produced an absolutely wonderful mental image of the rest of the casts of both shows looking back and forth between them like a tennis match.
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Date: 2005-04-06 07:17 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-05 09:34 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-06 07:18 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-05 09:49 pm (UTC)That was awesome and fun!
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Date: 2005-04-06 07:20 pm (UTC)Thank you :-D
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Date: 2005-04-05 10:54 pm (UTC)Rodney looked at him. "You knew, too." His eyes narrowed suspiciously. "Who else?"
Grodin held up a hand. As did Bates. And Ford. And Teyla. And after a few seconds, the entire population of the GateRoom, barring those who had just stepped through from Earth, had their hands in the air.
haha, John and Rodney are just so obvious.
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Date: 2005-04-06 09:02 pm (UTC)Not that I blame him for staring, mind ;-)
*grin*
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Date: 2005-04-05 11:34 pm (UTC)Only I bet the people just in from Earth knew, too. All those video reports from Rodney where he babbles.. and John wanders into the room and is wondering where something of his is and Rodney calls him 'sweetheart.'
Yeah. We all knew.
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Date: 2005-04-06 09:20 pm (UTC)You mean, where Rodney asks and Sam puts up her hand too. And Rodney just looks at her.
"What do you mean, you know?" he asked, irritated. "You live in another galaxy; how the hell could you know?"
"That message you sent about the Unification Theory? Major Sheppard walked into your lab and started looking for something."
Rodney nodded. "I remember." He turned to John. "You spent 10 minutes banging around looking for the remote for the Jumper." He looked back at Sam, "What about it."
Sam grinned. "Well, and I quote 'For god's sake, John, it's in the second drawer of my desk. Now let me get this finished and I'll come and find you, sweetheart."
"Sweetheart?" Elizabeth mouthed, raising an eyebrow at Zelenka.
"I'll have you know, I have never called anyone 'sweetheart' in my life!" splutter Rodney.
"Actually, you do it all the time," said John.
Rodney opened his mouth to reply, and then closed it again. A few moments passed and then, "Do I?"
John nodded. "Only when you're distracted, though."
"Which tends to be all the time where you're around," Rodney commented.
"Really?"
"You're very distracting, Major." Rodney's eyes travelled over John's body suggestively.
John just grinned.
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Date: 2005-04-06 09:38 pm (UTC)Yes, that.
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Date: 2005-04-06 09:41 pm (UTC)*cough*
Enquiring minds wonder when else he said this in front of people....
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Date: 2005-04-06 12:01 am (UTC)bwahahaha.
*dies*
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Date: 2005-04-06 09:22 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-06 12:41 am (UTC)That was *great*.
(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-06 09:23 pm (UTC)Thanks! Glad you enjoyed :-D
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Date: 2005-04-06 10:43 am (UTC)It was at this point that my computer very nearly became intimately acquainted with my morning glass of orange juice. What a wonderful way to start the day.
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Date: 2005-04-06 09:26 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-06 01:03 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-06 09:31 pm (UTC)Giggling is good *g*
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Date: 2005-04-07 08:18 am (UTC)Very funny! "Just like home!".... bwahahaha.
And next week on Stargate: Soapopera...
*snickers*
(You have to know that this was the very first piece of Atlantis fanfiction that I read... *goes on searching for more*)
You got some recs?
~Severusslave
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Date: 2005-04-09 11:53 pm (UTC)As for fic recs, I'd rec authors such as
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Date: 2005-04-08 08:03 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-09 11:54 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-04-24 03:03 am (UTC)Very fun.
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Date: 2005-04-25 09:23 pm (UTC)My favorite thing here is that Rodney's marriage proposal comes out sounding like an utterance of fact, rather than a sweet moment, even if it *is* a sweet moment.
*grin* That's Rodney for you ;-)
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Date: 2005-05-01 01:43 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-05-02 10:45 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2005-11-10 05:38 pm (UTC)love love love it. i've just spent a two hour seminar being subjected to Descartes via Science Fiction, and this? made it all worth it. *runs off to spread the goods to other needy people*
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Date: 2005-11-10 11:28 pm (UTC)