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About 35 minutes writing and the rest doing a tidy-up to it :-)

This was first conceived of in a conversation between myself, [livejournal.com profile] alyse and [livejournal.com profile] davechicken in a 'Wouldn't it be funny if...' kind of way. This is the result.

Title: Thank The Sun
Author: Claire
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: PG
Summary: "And you didn't think to tell us..."

Thank The Sun
by Claire

This was it; the day they'd been waiting for. After five years, Atlantis would once more welcome people from Earth.

For three years Rodney McKay and his science team had been working on the solar energy cells that had been discovered in an abandoned section of the city. After only a few weeks, they'd been able to generate enough energy to send and receive compressed data bursts. Since then, they'd been in constant communication, data travelling between Atlantis and Earth on a weekly basis.

Then three weeks ago Rodney and Radek Zelenka had burst into the control room declaring that they'd done it. They'd managed to stabilize the cells enough to enable them to reach full power. Two weeks of charging, and there was enough power in Atlantis to hold either an outgoing or an incoming wormhole stretching between the Pegasus Galaxy and the Milky Way. And now they were just waiting.

"Incoming wormhole," Peter Grodin's voice rang through the control room as the Stargate began to engage. "Receiving IDC. It's the SGC."

Elizabeth Weir glanced at him, nodding. "Lower the iris, Peter."

A few seconds later the wormhole burst from the Stargate and Elizabeth felt herself holding her breath. Felt herself holding it right up until the first figure stepped through the 'Gate.

Unable to hear anything but her heart pounding, she stepped forward. "General O'Neill, it's good to see you."

"O'Neill-Jackson now, actually," the General replied, smiling and taking her hand in his.

"O'Neill-Jackson?" Elizabeth felt her eyes drop to the General's nametag, and then to the nametag of the man standing next to him. "And Dr Jackson-O'Neill?"

Daniel Jackson-O'Neill nodded, just about to answer her when John Sheppard stepped forward, hand waving in a gesture she'd seen from Rodney McKay more than once.

"Wait a minute," Sheppard said. "O'Neill-Jackson? Jackson-O'Neill?

General O'Neill Jackson tensed. "Yes?" he said, face blank.

Sheppard continued to wave. "Well, I mean, you know…" he trailed off.

"Know what, Major?" Daniel asked.

"Don't ask, don't tell!" John exclaimed.

"Oh that?" The General shrugged. "Got rid of that a couple of years ago."

"And you didn't think to tell us?!"

Daniel looked at John. "I'm pretty sure we did."

"No, you didn't." Rodney stepped forward as he agreed with John. "You most definitely didn't."

"Are you sure?" Daniel asked.

"You think Rodney and I would have spent the last two years sneaking about if you had told us?" John's eyes widened as he realised what he said. "Not that we snuck around," he back-pedalled quickly as he turned to face Elizabeth. "Because that would be wrong."

Elizabeth held up a hand, placatingly. "John, calm down. I already knew."

"You knew?" Rodney subconsciously closed the distance between him and John. "How?"

"Well, it was pretty obvious when you asked for adjoining quarters," Zelenka commented. "With a shared balcony."

Rodney looked at him. "You knew, too." His eyes narrowed suspiciously. "Who else?"

Grodin held up a hand. As did Bates. And Ford. And Teyla. And after a few seconds, the entire population of the GateRoom, barring those who had just stepped through from Earth, had their hands in the air.

"But, we were careful!" John exclaimed.

"Oh, please," Bates said. "Having your hand on McKay's thigh all the way through movie night is not 'careful'."

"And that thing where you keep ending up in Rodney's shirts? Come on, Major. I mean, the excuse about getting the laundry mixed up was barely acceptable the first time, never mind the seventh," Elizabeth pointed out, pausing as she suddenly realised something. "That's why you got the entire Canadian Immigration website sent through a few months ago."

Rodney turned to John in surprise. "You looked into emigrating to Canada?"

"Damn right," answered John. "I took the test and everything, Passed with flying colours, too," he said proudly. "Including the test for entry into the Canadian Air Force."

"You didn't need to," Rodney said. "Marrying a Canadian automatically gives you citizenship. They'd have to take you."

"Marriage?" John asked.

"Yes," replied Rodney.

John paused for a moment. "Was that a proposal?"

Rodney glanced around, as if he'd only just realised everyone was watching them. "What if it is?"

"I might just say yes," answered John carefully.

"Okay," Rodney said. "I guess that was a proposal, then."

"I guess *that* was a yes, then," John said.

The two of them stared at each other for a long moment, before suddenly moving, lips clashing together in a fierce kiss.

Elizabeth turned back to the group from the SGC, most of who were pointedly ignoring the head of the Science Department and the head of the Military Contingency heavily making out behind her.

"Just like home," muttered Colonel Samantha Carter, meeting Elizabeth's eyes and smiling.

Seeing the amusement in the other woman's gaze, Elizabeth felt herself relax. "Welcome to Atlantis," she said, as she let the grin she'd been feeling finally come to her face.

End.

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Date: 2005-04-05 08:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] temaris.livejournal.com
*g* Nuts, you are. Classic case of not asking, and not getting told ;-)

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Date: 2005-04-05 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] davechicken.livejournal.com
WHEEEE.

That SO needed writing.

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Date: 2005-05-01 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raveninthewind.livejournal.com
I really like your icon. :)

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Date: 2005-05-01 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] davechicken.livejournal.com
Ahaha, thanks, I made it myself.

My icon likes you too.

the muse...

Date: 2005-04-05 08:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] majorsheppard.livejournal.com
is blushing. ;)

I think it ROCKS!

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Date: 2005-04-05 08:41 pm (UTC)
alyse: terminator genisys -full body shot of Sarah and Kyle walking away from the camera (Default)
From: [personal profile] alyse
HOWL! Oh, you wrote it!

Does that mean I have to write mine now?

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Date: 2005-04-05 09:12 pm (UTC)
ext_2117: (EEEEEE OMGSOCUTE!!!)
From: [identity profile] rokeon.livejournal.com
Elizabeth turned back to the group from the SGC, most of who were pointedly ignoring the head of the Science Department and the head of the Military Contingency heavily making out behind her.

*dies*

This produced an absolutely wonderful mental image of the rest of the casts of both shows looking back and forth between them like a tennis match.

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Date: 2005-04-05 09:34 pm (UTC)
spikedluv: (mcshep_shothim_goldie_gal)
From: [personal profile] spikedluv
Hee! That was so much fun! Loved the, "I'm sure we did" and the sneaking around that wasn't sneaking, and everyone in the control room raising their hands, lolol! And Sam's, "Just like home."

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Date: 2005-04-05 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carleton97.livejournal.com
Heeee!

That was awesome and fun!

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Date: 2005-04-05 10:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ship-recs.livejournal.com
That was fun!


Rodney looked at him. "You knew, too." His eyes narrowed suspiciously. "Who else?"

Grodin held up a hand. As did Bates. And Ford. And Teyla. And after a few seconds, the entire population of the GateRoom, barring those who had just stepped through from Earth, had their hands in the air.


haha, John and Rodney are just so obvious.

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Date: 2005-04-05 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zortified.livejournal.com
Bwahahahahahaha.

Only I bet the people just in from Earth knew, too. All those video reports from Rodney where he babbles.. and John wanders into the room and is wondering where something of his is and Rodney calls him 'sweetheart.'

Yeah. We all knew.

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Date: 2005-04-06 09:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zortified.livejournal.com
Squeee!

Yes, that.

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Date: 2005-04-06 09:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zortified.livejournal.com
"Actually, you do it all the time," said John.

*cough*

Enquiring minds wonder when else he said this in front of people....

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Date: 2005-04-06 12:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecomfychair.livejournal.com
Grodin held up a hand. As did Bates. And Ford. And Teyla. And after a few seconds, the entire population of the GateRoom, barring those who had just stepped through from Earth, had their hands in the air.
bwahahaha.
*dies*

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Date: 2005-04-06 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] frostfire-17.livejournal.com
AHAHAHAHAHA

That was *great*.

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Date: 2005-04-06 10:43 am (UTC)
ext_1584: (Default)
From: [identity profile] crystalheaven.livejournal.com
"You think Rodney and I would have spent the last two years sneaking about if you had told us?" John's eyes widened as he realised what he said. "Not that we snuck around," he back-pedalled quickly as he turned to face Elizabeth. "Because that would be wrong."

It was at this point that my computer very nearly became intimately acquainted with my morning glass of orange juice. What a wonderful way to start the day.

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Date: 2005-04-06 01:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] indybrat.livejournal.com
Seems like Sheppard inherited the O'Neill 'not getting the memo'problem.*g* and this line "Just like home," muttered Colonel Samantha Carter, meeting Elizabeth's eyes and smiling. just seemed to sum everything up nicely. I love fic that actually makes me giggle.

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Date: 2005-04-07 08:18 am (UTC)
ext_1215: (nipplering)
From: [identity profile] severusslave.livejournal.com
LOL!

Very funny! "Just like home!".... bwahahaha.
And next week on Stargate: Soapopera...

*snickers*
(You have to know that this was the very first piece of Atlantis fanfiction that I read... *goes on searching for more*)

You got some recs?

~Severusslave

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Date: 2005-04-08 08:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taelonmahal.livejournal.com
Aww, that was so cute. Just like home. Heh. And the whole gateroom raising their hands. Very cool. *beams*

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Date: 2005-04-24 03:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miriam-heddy.livejournal.com
My favorite thing here is that Rodney's marriage proposal comes out sounding like an utterance of fact, rather than a sweet moment, even if it *is* a sweet moment.

Very fun.

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Date: 2005-05-01 01:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raveninthewind.livejournal.com
This made me giggle, at the scenario--love the ending moment betweenSAm and Elizabeth.

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Date: 2005-11-10 05:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] noneeca.livejournal.com
dude. *falls over*
love love love it. i've just spent a two hour seminar being subjected to Descartes via Science Fiction, and this? made it all worth it. *runs off to spread the goods to other needy people*

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