OH, that was *fantastic*! This is one of the main reasons I love fanfiction - writers like you can show us the little things that don't make it into the show, but are still incredibly important. And you did it so well! This is so good that I had to point out the couple of typos I found (2 commas or something anyway & a capital K). It sounds weird, but I mean that as a compliment;)
Noted the pairs of Marines standing ready, a group of scientists arguing as they walked, recognized three people who'd been with him on the Daedalus new faces to replace those who hadn't survived one of the countless crises this mission had faced from the beginning.
"You read about Dr. Zelenka or Dr. Mckay up for seventy-two hours and finally pulling the answer out of the ether that saves the city once again but you don't read about the guy who kept refilling their coffee mugs and ran their errands and took their abuse.
Half turning she raised her voice enough to be heard in the control room.
Thanks for sharing! Great interpretation of the challenge.
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Date: 2006-08-15 05:18 am (UTC)Noted the pairs of Marines standing ready, a group of scientists arguing as they walked, recognized three people who'd been with him on the Daedalus new faces to replace those who hadn't survived one of the countless crises this mission had faced from the beginning.
"You read about Dr. Zelenka or Dr. Mckay up for seventy-two hours and finally pulling the answer out of the ether that saves the city once again but you don't read about the guy who kept refilling their coffee mugs and ran their errands and took their abuse.
Half turning she raised her voice enough to be heard in the control room.
Thanks for sharing! Great interpretation of the challenge.