"Chocolate Supplements" By Jade (Mission Report Challenge)

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Title: Chocolate Supplement 
Author: Jade
Rating: PG
Character(s): Ronon Dex. Mentions of Dr. Rodney McKay, Lt. Colonel John Sheppard, Teyla
Challenge: Mission Report
Summary: One of Ronon Dex's earliest mission reports.

Mission: M2T-443

Objective: Trade Negotiations for Chocolate supplements

Members: Lt. Colonel John Sheppard, Dr. Rodney McKay, Teyla Emmagan, Specialist Ronon Dex

 

We went to M2T-443 through the Stargate on foot at 1105 AST.

 

The village was located about three of your Earth kilometres away from the Stargate.

 

We entered trade negotiations. Teyla was able to negotiate for the Chocolate supplement and some basic food stuffs.

 

They threw a feast for us when the first stage of negotiations ended.

 

Dr. McKay managed to insult the cooks. Comaugh Sar’s youngest daughter tried to crawl into Colonel Sheppard’s pants – which made Dr. McKay insult her virtue in front of her father.

 

We were chased out of the village and back to the Stargate by spear wielding natives bent on avenging the insult to the young woman’s honour.

 

We arrived back in Atlantis at 1748 AST the day after departure.

 

Sorry we didn’t get the chocolate stuff we traded for. Sheppard forgot to grab the case when we were running for our lives.

Comments

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

lolol And with so much practice running, you'd think he'd remember to grab the important stuff. ;)
Great. Thanks.

[jade-1459.livejournal.com]

heh, I'm glad you liked this.

[jazmin22.livejournal.com]

I love that Ronon apologizes for not bringing back the chocolate stuff, even they were running for their lives and it was really John fault for not grabbing the case.

Awesome fic!

[jade-1459.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked this. The backstory I thought of for this little report had Elizabeth on the verge of PMS craving chocolate.

[reginabellatrix.livejournal.com]

lol. I love the fact that the chocolate was obviously the most important thing about the mission in Ronon's mind. Now there's a man with priorities!

[jade-1459.livejournal.com]

*g* Ronon seems like such a practical guy, and if your boss happens to be just this side of PMS craving chocolate... well then, chocolate is the single most important thing you can get. Besides, I've alwasy been sort of interested in possible Elizabeth/Ronon stories.

[shayz.livejournal.com]

*snicker-snort* Classic! A man who 'knows' that the 'chocolate stuff' was so important to our Lizzy that he took the time to apologize for losing it. That's a good man.

[jade-1459.livejournal.com]

Well, you gotta figure that there is the debrief before the report writing. And with Elizabeth (in the backstory) skirting the edge of PMS and wanting chocolate - the possible dressing down she might have given them would get an apology from Ronon. Specially if you look at this as my attempt to get Ronon courting her *bg*

[cherryblosomjen.livejournal.com]

Sweet!

No pun intended.

[jakisbishlygay.livejournal.com]

Of course he blames it on Sheppard!!!