Tumbai the Wraith Hunter by echelon_ga_l (backstory challenge)

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Title : Tumbai the Wraith Hunter
Author/artist : echelon_ga_l
Pairing : Hints of Ronon/Carson
Rating : R for light nudity
Warning : Slash, fluff.
Spoilers : Runner, Sateda... I think that's all.
Summary : Ronon met "Tumbai the Wraith hunter" a few weeks before his first birthday.
Disclaimer : Not mine, not mine ! Except Tumbai who is mine.
Author's note : Hum... well, I'm a drawer at first, not a writer, especially in english which isn't my first language. I just added some sentences to explain the pictures. Anyway you can blame me and whip me for all the mistakes. é__è" I created Tumbai a long time ago, for a single drawing, and I really needed to make a little story for him.


Tease me :




Ronon met "Tumbai the Wraith hunter" a few weeks before his first birthday. Tumbai was a present from Daddy.



They soon became the best friends ever. They were always together, they even slept in the same bed so Tumbai could protect Ronon from the Wraith during his sleep.



They grew up together and shared everything, everytime. As a best friend, Tumbai was always there and he never blown the whistle on Ronon when the old Mara's candies disappeared.



Tumbai was always there for Ronon, even when the little boy grew up to an handsome young man -- but he also knew when he had to be tactful and respect his privacy.




Tumbai was the only memory Ronon could bring from Sateda... so the Runner put him in his bag and left...




Seven long years later, an angel found Ronon and cured his wounds before bringing him to the City of the Ancients.



But if they had a bed and a place to stay now, all the pain wasn't gone. Tumbai was hurt too.



So the angel with magical hands cured Tumbai too, because it was the angel's nature to be nice with everybody.



And he did so much more for Ronon, but this his another story...

Comments

[wickedwords.livejournal.com]

That's very sweet.

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you ! Your icon is adorable he really looks like "Awww !" and prooves he has other faces than snarky face.

[westdean.livejournal.com]

That is awesomely sweet - loved it!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much !

[fleurrochard]

Oh, that's so cute! And I love the pictures!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you, it's the first time I post on this community, I wasn't sure if the "photo story" style would be appreciated. :)

[makesomelove.livejournal.com]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW THAT'S TOO CUTE. I lol'd really hard at Tumbai being tactful.

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

That's typically teenager (maybe more the girls) the will to be an adult, to have sex like a big boy but keeping anyway in a corner of the room the memories of childhood. ^^ I love the sweet side of Ronon.

[jimandblair.livejournal.com]

awwwww, the words and the pictures work really well. Hard to pick a favourite!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much ! I can't pick a favourite neither... maybe the gift from Daddy or the candies one. ^^

[kassrachel.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is wonderful! I love these illustrations, and the story they tell is so sweet. Wow.

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you, really ! <3

[mishcomplete.livejournal.com]

That was too cute for words! I love the last picture with cute little Tumbai sticking out!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thanks you ! I think Tumbai knows in the last picture that he will have to be tactful very soon.

[lyra-sena.livejournal.com]

This is totally adorable. Ronon and Tumbai are precious!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much ! The idea was too adorable in my head, I had to share or I would suffer a cuteness overload.

[darkrosetiger.livejournal.com]

That's adorable! I love Tumbai being tactful, and I want to grab baby!Ronon and squeeze, he's just that cute!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

I'm fond of baby!stories and this challenge already killed me a thousand times, so as Ronon is my favourite character I had to do something like that. ^^ I'm sure baby Jason was unbearably cute.

[gemmi999.livejournal.com]

oh my god. that is the sweetest fic I have ever read, and the pictures were wonderous as well. I love your drawning, and Ronon is so hot how you draw him. Part of me feels that I should feel *dirty* for perving after pictures, but you make them so gorgeous its hard not to. *sigh*

Thank you for drawing this!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

oh my god. that is the sweetest fic I have ever read
Hm... aw... *blushes*

Part of me feels that I should feel *dirty* for perving after pictures
When you see what kind of dirty stuff I usually draw, I think you are allowed to react this way even if it's just cartoon.

Thanks to YOU for your sweet comment ! ^__~

[adafrog.livejournal.com]

Beautiful. Thanks.

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank to you for the feedback ! :)

[hth-the-first.livejournal.com]

OMG, this is awesome!!! You do so much with so few lines, both in the art and the text -- it's so direct and full of feeling and lively and I *adore* it. Also, there should be so much more Ronon/Carson, and THIS IS EXACTLY WHY. I am bouncing up and down with delight, here! Thank you!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

I wanted simplistic sentences a child could say, like if it was young Ronon or Tumbai thinking and because it's cute IMO.

And you're right, there isn't enough Ronon/Carson, the ancients myths still have to be known and Androcles and the Lion is one of the bests ! ^__~

Thanks to you !

[springwoof.livejournal.com]

hee! cuteness.

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thanks you ! :D

[electricdesire.livejournal.com]

This is adorable! I actually went "Aww!" (to the annoyance of my dog, who was sleeping).

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Awwww poor doggie. Because of me ! *sad* He has to understand his mum has important things to watch and baby Ronon is one of them ! :p

[buddhaformattie.livejournal.com]

Tumbai's so cuuuute !
Perhaps you're alive because you shared it with us, but NOW I'm dead ! >_<

You know you're a goddess, ne ?

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Hehe glad to hear that ! ^^

[seratonation.livejournal.com]

awww! thats adorable! and I love the drawing style too :D

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you ! :) Glad you like my own style !

[garneteve.livejournal.com]

that is so wonderful1!!!!!
thankyou

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Oh, thanks to you for the feedback ! ^__~

[velocitygrass.livejournal.com]

This was so sweet. They are all lovely, but I think my favorite drawing is the second one :)

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you ! I love sleepy Ronon too who trust his doll, knowing he will protect him from the Wraith.

[inkscribe.livejournal.com]

This is beautiful! A sweet story, and the Angel? Ohhhh yes. :-)

Thank you for sharing!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thanks to you ! ^^ Yep, Carson is a kind of angel, in my opinion... excepted when he's a sadistic rapist but it doesn't happens all the time. *lol*

[jmchau.livejournal.com]

cute cute

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

So is your icon ! *g* I don't know how comes I love Gakkun as much as Ronon but I think it's good to have different kinds of men in your harem.

Adorable

[(Anonymous)]

I love your art and your story! I wasn't really paying attention when I clicked on the link, so the format was a total surprise, and a most excellent one!

Re: Adorable

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thanks dear anonymous ! :) I'm not a good writer at all, I wanted to post a fanart at first but couldn't help drawing the story.

[helens78]

This is so incredibly sweet! I love Tumbai, and I loved seeing what Carson did for Ronon through his eyes. And your art is just amazing. :)

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thank you ! I wanted to show the cutest part of child!Ronon and even if I hesitated a long time before choosing Carson, Ronon matches everyone on Atlantis but the parrallel between Ronon and Tumbai's stitches was the most interesting and logical. ^^

[zillah975]

This is lovely! Thank you so much for posting it!

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Thanks to you for your nice review ! ^^

Btw, does your username come from Zillah... teh sexy bloodsucker Zillah ?

[kyuuketsukirui.livejournal.com]

Oh my God, this is so cute! I love wee!Ronon! I think my favorite is the third panel. ♥

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Ronon is one of my favourite characters, and he's already kind of cute, so when he was a child I just can imagine the cuties he was. Nobody can resist a baby, especially an hawaian baby. They make me squee.

The third was funny because I can imagine Ronon as an adult stealing Rodney's candies. It wouldn't be OOC in the show.

[sor-bet.livejournal.com]

It's all wonderful, both the story and the drawings. The idea of a wraith-hunter doll/protector for children is very cool.

I especially liked the frame with Carson removing the transmitter, because I can remember how it looked in the show, and you have drawn almost a snapshot of that scene, but in your own style. (I don't quite remember Carson sitting so close behind Ronon like that, but, um, artistic license, right? ;-D ) Lovely.

[echelon-ga-l.livejournal.com]

Awww thanks for commenting on this old piece ! :) I thought the big Ronon with his tiny doll would be super cute.

This scene was really impressive and I had to make them closer because you know, the way I draw my characters they have short arms... XD that's a good excuse !