Oh, that last one is really a punch in the gut! I've never really thought about the fact that Teyla might actually resent John a bit for forcing her and her people to leave Athos.
I have to say that the first three confuse me a bit too. Maybe it's because I know next to nothing about SG-1. I'd really like to know who said the second one.
Structure wise, the third one is beautiful! I love the different layers and the writing really stands out and looks awesome!
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Date: 2008-01-01 05:59 am (UTC)I have to say that the first three confuse me a bit too. Maybe it's because I know next to nothing about SG-1. I'd really like to know who said the second one.
Structure wise, the third one is beautiful! I love the different layers and the writing really stands out and looks awesome!