[identity profile] unadrift.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sga_flashfic
Title: On Fire
Author: [personal profile] unadrift
Categories: gen, humor, team
Rating: PG
Words: 368
Notes: Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] naye for the lightning quick beta and the squee!




It wasn't until he heard Rodney giggle that John noticed something was off. The chieftain caught his eye from across the fire, grinning like a madman. He gestured at John while nodding vigorously. Why exactly, John wasn't sure.

The world started spinning slowly, and what the hell was in that smoke?

"I'm burning," Rodney said dreamily, followed by another giggle.

Burning for the blonde tribal girl who had been giving Rodney the cold shoulder all evening, John guessed. But then Teyla yelped -- honest-to-God yelped -- and John turned to look. Rodney was burning all right. Literally. His sleeve had caught fire. Small, still innocent flames were lapping at the material of his jacket, while Rodney was watching, mesmerized.

"McKay!" That was Ronon, catching on.

A moment later Rodney was tackled to the ground by three people at once. John tried not to be miffed by the fact that Teyla and Ronon were faster. He just let himself fall on top of the heap. Six hands grabbed for Rodney's sleeve, trying to smother the flames. There was fumbling and cursing involved, and a "Hold the fuck still, McKay," uttered by Ronon, and then the job was done.

At which point Rodney, squashed beneath the three of them, totally unconcerned, started to sing," Oh oh oooh, I'm on fiiire!" very off-key.

That was it.

John laughed. He laughed so hard that he had to slide off Ronon, Teyla and Rodney. He laughed until tears were streaming down his face; until he was clutching his side because it hurt. Rodney was giggling again, in a very unmanly way.

It was a given that no one else got the Springsteen reference, so Ronon's honest laugh was a surprising sound -- one John didn't think he had ever heard before. Teyla was soon gasping for air, too.

John breathed, lying flat on the ground, until his hiccups had subsided. Then he crawled over to find that Rodney had locked his arms around the others. Tightly. He was still humming contently.

"McKay," Ronon said, not quite annoyed, voice muffled by Teyla's vest. Teyla just sighed.

Team, John thought dopily, and hugged Rodney's knee to his chest. They were his most favorite team ever.


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Date: 2008-04-19 10:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miscellanny.livejournal.com
Aaaaaaw!

*sappygrin*

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Date: 2008-04-19 10:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spike21.livejournal.com
Awwww. Yay Team!

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Date: 2008-04-19 10:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dovil.livejournal.com
Awwwww, bless! This needs to be filmed. :)

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Date: 2008-04-19 10:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] melagan.livejournal.com
This is adorable and I ♥ that last line

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Date: 2008-04-19 11:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zinfic.livejournal.com
Awwww... I could see that! They're so cute when they're stoned.

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Date: 2008-04-19 12:08 pm (UTC)
ext_975: photo of a woof (Team)
From: [identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com
hurray for the team! even when they're a little high from alien what-the-hell-was-in-the-smoke, they look after each other....

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From: [identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com - Date: 2008-04-21 02:36 am (UTC) - Expand

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Date: 2008-04-19 12:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] panisdead.livejournal.com
Eeeee! I had a giant dopy grin on my face starting at the "I'm on fiiiiire" bit.

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Date: 2008-04-19 01:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mary-russell11.livejournal.com
heee!!*laughs loudly* I totally lost it when I picutred them all, Ronon and Teyla on Rodney and John holding his leg and giggling *snickers* great story!

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Date: 2008-04-19 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mukanshin.livejournal.com
Aww~ *wuffs*

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Date: 2008-04-19 01:37 pm (UTC)
leesa_perrie: two cheetahs facing camera and cuddling (Team 1)
From: [personal profile] leesa_perrie
Spaced-out team = really cute teaminess! Nice.

Team, John thought dopily, and hugged Rodney's knee to his chest. They were his most favorite team ever.

Brilliant last lines - I want to hug them all...

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Date: 2008-04-19 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mangst.livejournal.com
Aw. Dopey, sweet team. :)

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Date: 2008-04-19 02:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emeraldsword.livejournal.com
LMAO *gleeful flails* So sweet!

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Date: 2008-04-19 03:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gnine.livejournal.com
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, so CUTE! Mmmm, yay for team-y goodness!

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Date: 2008-04-19 03:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alleonh.livejournal.com
"They were his most favorite team ever"

*goofy squee filled grin*


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Date: 2008-04-19 04:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dragonladyk.livejournal.com
Stoned!team is the best. ^^ This was terribly amusing.

DragonLady

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Date: 2008-04-19 04:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sorcerygenius.livejournal.com
Aww! They're my most favorite team ever too.

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Date: 2008-04-19 05:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceitie.livejournal.com
This is hilarious and adorable, and I love the giant team cuddle at the end.

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Date: 2008-04-19 05:38 pm (UTC)
sholio: sun on winter trees (Team Love)
From: [personal profile] sholio
heeeeeee! So cute when they're stoned! They're my most favorite team ever, too! :D This put a big smile on my face.

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Date: 2008-04-19 07:49 pm (UTC)
ext_3572: (sga team)
From: [identity profile] xparrot.livejournal.com
...obviously they need to get stoned more often, 'cuz they're adorable like this!

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Date: 2008-04-19 08:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] accidentalfan.livejournal.com
Hee hee hee. That's a happy kind of smoke. Whheee!

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Date: 2008-04-19 09:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com
This totally calls for my Team Shep icon. :3

I am pimping this fic to all my friends. (And I assume the smoke is from Rodney being on fire? Nevermind, reread the line. XD)
Edited Date: 2008-04-19 09:40 pm (UTC)

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From: [identity profile] eliyes.livejournal.com - Date: 2008-04-21 01:22 am (UTC) - Expand

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Date: 2008-04-20 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hestia-lacey.livejournal.com
Oh, how adorable! I do so love these guys *hugs*

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Date: 2008-04-20 01:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] linziday.livejournal.com
*vbg* Aw jeez!

yay

Date: 2008-04-20 06:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wolfdancer.livejournal.com
so seeing this

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Date: 2008-04-20 08:54 am (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (team dark)
From: [personal profile] sage
D'awwwwwww, yay!! :D
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