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Title: Going Native (Men and Machines Challenge)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] slybrarian
Rating: Adult / NC-17
Pairings: Sheppard/Mitchell/Atlantis
Words: 512
Series: Discontinuity (Reading not required.)
Notes: AU, set after "The Return Part II".

Summary: Everyone with the gene has their subtle quirks. John's quirks aren't so subtle.


Cam noticed it almost immediately when he came to Atlantis the second time. He wants to think the only reason he hadn't spotted it the last time was that he'd barely spent any time in the city itself, but maybe, just maybe he sees it now because his own skin is tingling whenever he walks down the halls. They're subtle enough things, the little quirks that the other gene carriers have, both natural and artificial, and to the casual observer they might blend into the background of the city's general weirdness. Cam can see them all clearly now: the way Rodney can fix equipment while not even looking and berating someone on a completely different topic; how Amelia and Chuck react to incoming wormholes a second before the gate activates; Lorne's odd ability to find anyone, anywhere, anytime as long as they're in the city.

Then there was John.

John, who has always been anything but subtle. He stops mid-step and glances at random, unremarkable wall panels and casually sends maintenance requests to Zelenka before walking on. He practically creams his pants every time he's allowed to show off in the jumpers. He's always comfortable, no matter how much or how little clothing he's wearing, because the temperature is always just right. He even managed once to convince the food processor to produce chocolate instead of brightly-colored cubes of Play-Dough. It all comes as naturally to him as breathing.

John, who's murmuring quietly, "Yeah, yeah, sicut ille, propara, amo te," in a language that neither of them speak but Cam can understand perfectly none the less.

John, who's spread out on Cam's bed and barely coherent because Cam's right there on top of him, balls-deep inside of him, slowly rocking his hips back and forth. The dim lights flicker and shift with each little thrust; the air system starts and stops, gets louder and softer in perfect time to each breath John takes and each gasp he lets out. It feels like there's static in the air that builds with each moment and makes every little touch spark and crackle. It's been intensifying day by day, every time they've managed to sneak to each other's quarters or steal a moment alone, until now Cam can feel something more and greater all around them.

Cam knows he should be freaking out. This is exactly the sort of thing they warn you about in Stargate Command's standard Orientation and Processing briefings: alien influences, brain-altering technology, mental contamination. It explains so much, too, like the wistful tones Cam heard whenever Lorne and Parrish joined him and John for dinner and the three of them started talking about home, like the near-suicidal determination to retake the city John and his companions had possessed when the Asurans attacked. There's more than one person back on Earth who would declare them all compromised in a second. It feels so right, though, and Cam wonders how long it'll take him to go native just like the rest of them have.

Maybe he already has, because the thought doesn't even worry him.

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Date: 2009-01-05 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ninja007.livejournal.com
SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

Thank you!!

Watching Vegas made me soooo sad.

This definitely made me feel better!!

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Date: 2009-01-05 06:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cat-77.livejournal.com
Oh, I like this! Love it when people explore the whole Atlantis/ATA connection, and you did so wonderfully!

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Date: 2009-01-05 07:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cadencecascade.livejournal.com
Yes. This is perfect. !!!!

John's relationship with the city, that instinctual knowledge. The way she loves all the ATA personel but loves him the most...

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Date: 2009-01-06 01:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cadencecascade.livejournal.com
thank goodness for fanfic writers who take up the slack. *wags finger reprovingly at the writers; again*
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Date: 2009-01-05 08:39 am (UTC)
ext_24935: made by <lj user="seapoke"> (Shep High Life)
From: [identity profile] devikun.livejournal.com
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMM! That was utterly delicious! I love the way they've gone native without even noticing, and Cam, the eternal outsider, can see how and still doesn't care and geez with John Sheppard laid out like that, who'd be able to?!

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Date: 2009-01-05 09:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluflamingo.livejournal.com
Mm, yes. I love their different connections to the city, and how deep in Cam already is, because of John.

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Date: 2009-01-05 05:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluflamingo.livejournal.com
Of course, that's not to say John's not pulling him right into the deep end before he can even test the water...

Yeah, that's what I was trying (badly) to say-that John's pulling him in much faster than he'd probably go on his own, tho he would go in the end regardless.

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Date: 2009-01-05 02:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
Wonderful. Perfect.

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Date: 2009-01-05 02:39 pm (UTC)
ext_2047: (Default)
From: [identity profile] bironic.livejournal.com
John speaking Ancient without realizing it = nnnnnng. Plus the shifting of air and light along with his gasping. Yes.

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Date: 2009-01-05 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jujuberry136.livejournal.com
This is awesome.

Love the idea of going native and how awesome it could be. Loved the use of fandom tropes (Lorne always able to find someone, etc) as a result of the gene.

Thanks for sharing!

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Date: 2009-01-05 03:03 pm (UTC)
skieswideopen: Sydney Bristow and Nadia Santos standing on a bridge (handguns)
From: [personal profile] skieswideopen
This fabulous! I love the idea that every gene carrier has a different type of connection of Atlantis.

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Date: 2009-01-05 04:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angelofmercy.livejournal.com
Ooh, I love it.

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Date: 2009-01-05 10:03 pm (UTC)
ext_1246: (Default)
From: [identity profile] dossier.livejournal.com
LOL compromised indeed--with half a minute's chance. really beautiful imagery there, sicut ille, propara, amo te.

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Date: 2009-01-07 03:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miera-c.livejournal.com
Yum. And I love the tidbits about the other gene carriers and their quirks. Such an interesting dynamic that didn't get enough attention on the show.

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Date: 2009-01-07 07:48 am (UTC)
ext_19652: (stargate flyboys)
From: [identity profile] spock74.livejournal.com
Thank you!! IMO, there can never be too much flyboy porn in the world. I don't suppose you'd consider posting this over at [livejournal.com profile] pilotgasm?

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Date: 2009-01-10 06:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] master-kogane.livejournal.com
Very enjoyable!

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Date: 2009-01-11 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thefrogg.livejournal.com
This so totally totally rocks.

Seriously, I was getting ready to message you and ask if I could play in this universe, but refreshed your LJ and saw the holding spot for the universe master post, so decided not to. Like I need another universe to play in anyways - currently up to my eyeballs in background info on another fic.::sigh::

I love love love how all the little vagaries of the ATA abilities slot so well with the person's job. Atlantis really does love her people.

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Date: 2009-01-12 09:50 pm (UTC)
kazbaby: (Anything for the team (Cam/Daniel))
From: [personal profile] kazbaby
*shiver* Damn... I can't even put into words just how fucking hot that is. :D

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Date: 2009-01-13 03:29 am (UTC)
kazbaby: (Impressive (Cam))
From: [personal profile] kazbaby
Yes and No... depends on how long we have to wait to read it. ;)

(thank you! i'd made it after [livejournal.com profile] ivorygates lamented on the lack of having more Cam/Daniel icons. *g*)

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Date: 2009-01-25 11:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyizi.livejournal.com
Oh! *squee* I love this! Sentient!Atlantis makes me so very very happy!

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