Slave Challenge, by Girl Clone

[claire.livejournal.com]

He wanted to touch. Oh god he wanted to touch; to run his fingers through that soft hair, his teeth along that stubbled jaw. He wanted to kiss the quirk from that mouth, to turn that infuriating competence into gasping, begging need. He wanted those hands stroking his chest, his neck, his cock. He wanted to feel those fingers entwined with his afterwards.

He wanted friendship, he wanted laughter, he wanted lazy mornings spent in bed.

He just wanted...

But he was bound by the rules and traditions of the life he'd chosen. He could want, but he couldn't have.

Comments

[spikedluv]

But he was bound by the rules and traditions of the life he'd chosen. He could want, but he couldn't have.

Great take on the challenge! It still amazes me how much emotion can be packed into 100 words. Good job. *g*

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[porntestpilot.livejournal.com]

Were! *jumps on you for snogging purposes*

Excellent!

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thanks ;)

[scrollgirl.livejournal.com]

Wonderful!

He wanted friendship, he wanted laughter, he wanted lazy mornings spent in bed.

*sniff* Poor John. Don't we all.

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you. (I'm sure Rodney will work it out and take charge).

[ellex42.livejournal.com]

Short and to the point. Excellent.

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank You.

[wickedwords.livejournal.com]

you did a great job in packing all that emotion into 100 words. very nice.

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

[wagacca.livejournal.com]

Aww, no fair. John's all sad and lonely :(

I've got friends who are USAF (and I'm actually wearing a property of USAF t-shirt, coincidentally), but that rule just sucks.

Great job, btw ;)

[claire.livejournal.com]

Aww, no fair. John's all sad and lonely :(

I'm sure Rodney will figure it out and fix it ;)

And thank you.

[zoerayne]

Ouch. Poor John. That was just beautiful.

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[alizarin-nyc.livejournal.com]

Very well done. And too true for our poor guy.

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

[pegasus-01.livejournal.com]

*gasps and twists physically at the angst* I love drabbles. I feel like the most powerful emotions come from drabbles (the well written ones), and that last line! *sighs* Poor John. Loved it! *thumbs up!*

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you for taking the time to tell me you liked it.

[celli]

*loves*

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :)

[indybrat.livejournal.com]

It's just not fair that you can get that much emotion into so few words. and you made me sniffle. damnit. Wonderful piece.

[claire.livejournal.com]

I'm sorry for making you sniffle. I'll buy you a drink to make up for it ;)

And thanks!

[indybrat.livejournal.com]

Cool. I'll hold you to that. and you're welcome. hee only 11 more sleeps. yes because I'm 5 or something. lol

[calijirl5150.livejournal.com]

((((((Shepp))))))) poor lonely soul, great job :)

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you.

Yes, poor Shep needs a hug ;)

[engenda.livejournal.com]

Oh. So hurty. In that very good way. This is awesome, you can say so much with so little.

Lovely, and hurty and oh, god Rodney - you have to, you just do, you have to realise and take charge.

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thanks for liking it. Perhaps one day I'll write a real story with plot and a beta and everything ;)

And I'm sure Rodney will work it out and ambush Sheppard late one evening and blow him until he gives in.

[engenda.livejournal.com]

And I'm sure Rodney will work it out and ambush Sheppard late one evening and blow him until he gives in.

Oh. Yeah.

[neery.livejournal.com]

This is great! I'm always amazed how people can actually write anything with any impact in a hundred words, but you really managed to get a lot emotion into a bit of text.

[claire.livejournal.com]

Thank you!