FIc: Unhealthy Attachment

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Title: Unhealthy Attachment
Author Amireal
Rating: Rish for smidge of smut and some icky descriptions
Notes: Wow, ok I blame everyone who encouraged me. Most especially forcryinoutloud. You suck.
Thanks to my beta reader chopchica because my grammer sucks man.

It should also be noted that I had to fight my brain on this, because it was all "But but, REALISM!" and I was all "But but, Harlequin!!"

Summary: "So your bedside manner leaves a lot to be desired."

Fic can be found here

Comments

[ruggerdavey.livejournal.com]

*flials excitedly* Oh my god, that rocked. Rocked, rocked, rocked. What wouldn't I give for a sequel. Awesome.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Sequel?

EEk.

No.

I have like... 12,000 other fics I should be finishing. One of which is so cracktastic it scares me. More than this one did.

Thanks for the FB!

[pionie.livejournal.com]

Some great lines and banter and lots of lovely touching! And whoomped John, who I love so much.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

hee. Isn't he perdy?

Thanks for fb!

[crystalheaven.livejournal.com]

*squeeeeees* So, totaly love this fic.

From John's reaction to Rodney knowing the Chief-of-Staff, the whole snark thing the two of them have going on (and you so got their characters dead on, and I love you all the more for that) and then ending. *melts* I so love the ending. Oh to be in that hallway...*dirty smiles*

[amireal.livejournal.com]

*grins* Characterization is KEY for crack.

Thank you!

Smut is SO overrated.

Thanks!

[fatuorum.livejournal.com]

Lovely story! And I like your writing style muchly *g*

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Heee. Thank you!

I don't view it as a writing style so much as a hit and run with words. ;)

[coreopsis.livejournal.com]

I especially love Rodney's bedside manner. :)

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Me too. Not sure why, I've been post surgical too. But then again, never got orgasms from it either.

;)

Thanks for the fb!

[ltlj.livejournal.com]

This was great, I really loved it!

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Hee! Thanks!

[bluebrocade.livejournal.com]

That was so great. Love love love it.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

*bows*

Danke!

[bibliokat.livejournal.com]

Eeee! Cute! I loved it. Very much;)

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Well, that certainly helps subvert some of the Shame.

SHAME!

Ahem.

Thanks!

[logovo.livejournal.com]

Ah, this was so enjoyable. I loved Rodney being the gruff caregiver :) Thank you very much for this treat.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Thank you!

Now imagine him in a candystriper's outfit. :)

Thanks for the fb!

[fairestcat]

Oh, I love Rodney's bedside manner. This is just great, appropriately cracktastic but with spot on characterizations.

*loves*

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Crack is better with characterizations. *nods*

Yes it is.

*snorts another line*

Thanks for the fb!

[hopeowl.livejournal.com]

Fantistic story! I adored it.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

*grin*

Thanks!

[scap3goat.livejournal.com]

Oh! Great! Lovely!
I really enjoyed this!

[amireal.livejournal.com]

YAY!

Thanks!

[mandragora1.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed this. Great characterisation.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

w00t! Thank you!

[fureux.livejournal.com]

LOVE IT!

[amireal.livejournal.com]

*HUGS IT*

Ahem.

Thank you!

[moonslash.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you won the fight with your brain, because this was great. Really loved the last line, too.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Heee. Last line is one of my favs.

*grins*

[mmmchelle.livejournal.com]

I enjoyed this immensely. The opening scenes in the hospital with a drugged John and a protective Rodney were just perfect. Thank you.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Perfect huh? Nifty!

*tips hat* Thank you!

[kiranovember.livejournal.com]

Wow. That was different, but in a original kind of way, and really well done. I've got a H/C kink that's hard to satisfy because so much of it is over-the-top shmoopiness and totally OOC, but your John and Rodney were themselves. John's laid-back tolerance for weirdness is intact, and I liked that no matter what Rodney *said* his actions spoke louder. You give hurt/comfort a good name.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Different in an original kind of way? That's a new one ;).

And yes, shmoop between those two characters is bad bad stuff. Nightmarish even. *nods sternly*

Hurt/Comfort a good name huh? Who's the dirty slut who was giving it a bad one? *naughty grin*

Thank you so much for the feedback!

[jayel-fox.livejournal.com]

Definitely high quality crack. Good stuff!

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Weee.

Yay!

[the-green-sheep.livejournal.com]

Oooh, great story. Thanks. :)

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Welcome! Thanks for the FB!

[ladyvyola.livejournal.com]

Shame, shame on you!

For such a fun and well-characterized cracktastic fic.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

SHAME! SHAAAAAAAAAME!

Ahem. Yay for characterization.

[surreul.livejournal.com]

lovely fic!

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Danke!

[claire.livejournal.com]

Nice ;)

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Going. To. Hell.

*nods*

Hee. Thanks!

[seperis.livejournal.com]

Okay, that was *fun*. I loved the mystery of it all, and how slowly you revealed everything, and that was--yes, *fun*.

I'll be in my happy place, squeeing. Happily.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Heee, thank you here too!!

I've got oodles of backstory. Because my brain kept wanting it to, you know, make more sense!


*shakes head sadly*

[panisdead.livejournal.com]

Very cool. I like the John POV--lets the reader understand just as much (or as little) of the situation as he does.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

mmm... fuzzy headed John.

Ahem.

Thank you!

[wickedwords.livejournal.com]

I am a big H/c fan, and this really hit a lot of my buttons. It's very cool. Thanks.

[amireal.livejournal.com]

Anytime!

Same to you. *grins*

Thanks for the feedback!