[identity profile] umbo.livejournal.com posting in [community profile] sga_flashfic
Title: Seasons
Author: Shell ([livejournal.com profile] umbo)
Pairing: McKay/Sheppard
Rating: G
Notes: Earlier today, [livejournal.com profile] estrella30 posted requesting "sexy spring comment fic." This isn't her fandom, and there's no sex in it, and I wrote and edited it in about 38 minutes, so I'm posting it here. Beta thanks to [livejournal.com profile] panisdead. 362 words.

Seasons

Rodney misses seasons sometimes. It's ridiculous--he spends much more time outside now than he ever did before, and on M3X 789 it'll be fall, the leaves changing to an alarming shade of pink, and the next week on M29 421 the snow will be falling in big puffy flakes like a Christmas card, and then he'll come back to the endless summer of Atlantis, with the blue ocean surrounding them like some sort of tropical paradise. So it's not as if he never gets to see any seasons--he sees more seasons in two months in the Pegasus galaxy than he saw in 5 years at the SGC.

But it's not the same, somehow, because it *is* endless summer where he lives, and even when he was stuck in Antarctica he could tell spring was coming when the sun first rose over the mountains, because all the gung-ho outdoorsy types would drag them all out to see it. Here the quality of light coming through his window never changes much, and he finds himself thinking fondly of the springs of his childhood, when it seemed the winter would never end, until one day you could see some ground peeping through the melting snow. Then suddenly there would be tulips everywhere, in all the neighbors' yards, and his mom would yell at him to wipe his muddy feet every time he came inside.

So the next time they have leave, he and John go back, ostensibly to see his sister, but really to see the spring in southern Ontario.

John knows something's up when Rodney volunteers to take the dog for walks every afternoon. Rodney can't exactly tell him he's watching the long green shoots grow and bud, waiting and hoping they flower before they have to go back--he'd never hear the end of it. John somehow figures it out anyway, because he takes off for a few days after they get back, coming back each evening with dirt ground under his nails, and six months later takes Rodney to an area in the north of the mainland where, it turns out, it's spring. It's spring, and there are tulips everywhere.

END

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Date: 2006-01-04 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misspamela.livejournal.com
Oh, YAY! You're writing! And it's wonderful!

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Date: 2006-01-04 01:34 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] etben.livejournal.com
awww! how sweet! I like Rodney not wanting to admit that he misses seasons, when he so totally does. and tulips! yay!

and, yay! someone's making spring happy in SGA! Which is totally necessary, since it's got such a spring feeling about it - all discovery and excitement, people finally fitting in where they need to and everything being lovely. (or that's how it is in my head, at least)

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Date: 2006-01-04 01:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emrinalexander.livejournal.com
That's wonderful, makes me want spring too, Rodney's not the only one. And how like John - to say nothing and then do the most wonderful thing possible with the tulips!

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Date: 2006-01-04 02:16 am (UTC)
ext_841: (john glasses)
From: [identity profile] cathexys.livejournal.com
oh, that's so sweet! john planting tulips for rodney!

and i so feel with rodney...i remember moving into "the big city" and the thing that unsettled me most was the fact that i couldn't tell when harvest began....

thank you!!!!

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Date: 2006-01-04 02:20 am (UTC)
ext_1175: (gee whiz by kaesaria)
From: [identity profile] lamardeuse.livejournal.com
Oh my god, that is the most romantic 362 words EVER. I love this, hon!

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Date: 2006-01-04 03:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sffan.livejournal.com
Awww. This was really nice (which seems to be my new word *sigh*)

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Date: 2006-01-04 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mcalex22.livejournal.com
Wow, this was very beautiful and I liked what John did - I love tulips and to see one bloom is nice. Very quiet and romantic.

Thanks for sharing :-D

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Date: 2006-01-04 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] skoosiepants.livejournal.com
*sigh* so lovely and sweet :)

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Date: 2006-01-04 04:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mecurtin.livejournal.com
I love it! (even though I'm a daffodil-lover myself)

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Date: 2006-01-04 04:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anitac588.livejournal.com
Oh, that is so sweet and romantic. *happy sigh*

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Date: 2006-01-04 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ruggerdavey.livejournal.com
That is just the most romantic thing ever. Loved it.

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Date: 2006-01-04 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyvyola.livejournal.com
Oh! John more than gave him flowers, he gave him spring!

Kill a girl with romance, why don't you?

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Date: 2006-01-04 11:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purna.livejournal.com
Sigh. Just lovely.

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Date: 2006-01-08 08:10 am (UTC)
fairestcat: Dreadful the cat (SGA Best and Brightest)
From: [personal profile] fairestcat
This is lovely, just lovely.

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