Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts by Speranza (Virgin Challenge)

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Title: Pure Bodies and Clean Hearts (26k)
Author: Speranza
Pairing: McShep
Summary: John gets a do-over.

Thanks to shalott, giddy, and res for beta beyond the call of duty.

Comments

[(Anonymous)]

This -- well yes obviously this was hot (as in, really, really, REALLY hot), but even more than that (Even more! Than THAT!) I enjoyed how it was written --visual without being overbearing, the way it connected to bits of the story before ... I'm the sort of reader who breezes thru stories when I read (like with Fahrenheir 451 -- I read it and thought God, yes, that was beautiful and I almost cried but stupid, stupid, stupid for not taking it slower), but because of how this one was written I actually slowed to enjoy the way the words flowed together. So um yeah. Thank you.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! Wow, what a great compliment: its very appreciated! *beam!**