The Birds (PG) by Miriel
Mar. 14th, 2007 09:59 pmTitle: The Birds
Author:
miriel
Rating: PG
Author's Note: Um, so this didn't go at all where I had expected it to. I am very interested to hear what anyone thinks of it. It's a look at an aspect of the Genii life that I'm not sure anyone has poked at, yet, as well as an unexpected look into Kolya's motivations.
ETA: Mild correlation with Irresponsible, but nothing major and certainly nothing you'll recognize if you haven't seen the ep (which I haven't; I was informed second-hand).
For as long as anyone can remember, the Genii have lived underground. They may walk in the sunshine on those days when the Ring of the Ancestors awakens, but they live underground. It is where they laugh, and sing, and truly smile. When they smile at all, that is, which isn't often.
They live underground, because theirs is a legacy of betrayal that stretches back more than ten thousand years. Back to the day when the message came from the Ancestors that help would not be arriving as promised. The Genii were too few, the Ancestors said, and scattered between too many worlds to defend effectively; the resources for the war would be better used elsewhere. So the Genii did what they did best, and persevered. For their efforts, they were very nearly extinguished.
The pattern was repeated again and again over the years - first the Shinaak, then the Hoffans, and by the time the Kitar withdrew their promised allegiance, the Genii had ceased to be surprised. Alliances were made to be broken; this was the the truth that the Genii learned at the cost of countless lives.
When the Athosians appeared through the Ring of the Ancestors, the Genii offered nothing but what could be seen upon the surface. They spoke not about resisting the Wraith or the city that they struggled to rebuild deep within the heart of their world and the hundreds who sheltered there while they worked. The Athosians seemed content with that; they were a simple people themselves, by all appearances, and asked for nothing more than Tava beans in exchange for very high quality leathers. In time, relations between the two cultures progressed to something approaching 'friendly, but distant', and all was as well as could be in a galaxy ruled by the Wraith.
Underground, the Genii used the new leather to make better gloves for the workers who tunneled ever further to expand the hidden city. For the welders who worked to strengthen the supports that had failed one or ten or two hundred years before. A year after the next major culling hit, the city was deemed finished and the power levels sufficient to support the current population. The survivors flocked to the safety represented by walls of stone and metal, glad of something that could once again be called their own. In keeping with the need for secrecy, every citizen would serve a spell on the surface. They would grow the food that was needed to feed those below, and they would maintain the image that had been so painstakingly crafted.
There was one family who did not set foot upon the surface, tied instead to the rock in a way that few could understand. They were the bird keepers, those who tended the small lives that insured so many others. A strange breed of exile within their own society, they knew not the light of the sun or the touch of the stars; their lives were contained within the flicker of torches, the songs of the birds, and the endless prayers that the songs never stop. The birds were, like the Genii people themselves, descendants of survivors who had crawled from the rubble of that first horrific culling. They, like their ancestors, stood guard over their human keepers in the endless black of the tunnels and never complained.
Every once in a while, one of them would return to the city looking for a spouse, and decide to remain among the people that they guarded so fiercely from such a distance. The last to take the journey to the city was a boy named Acastus.
Marked as an outsider by the paleness of his skin, he struggled desperately to find a place in the light of the deep city, in that strange mixture of above and below. When his turn on the surface came, it was marked by pain as his skin adapted to the harsh light of the sun, but he survived it just as he had survived the cave-ins that struck in the outer tunnels. Despite his status as outsider-within, he toughened and progressed well through the ranks of leadership; soon enough, the lessons of allegiance and betrayal flowed within his veins as surely as did the blood of the keepers.
An unspoken rule amongst the Genii is that the keepers do not leave their world. A few may leave the tunnels - all leave for a time, to seek spouses, but most for no more than a few months - but none may leave the safety of the homeworld. It is deemed bad luck, for the secrets of the birds to venture beyond the Ring of the Ancestors. By the time he became a leader within the military, Acastus Kolya's past as a keeper had been all but forgotten, and no one questioned his right to lead a strike team after those who had inevitably betrayed them.
Then came the culling, and the earth trembled and shook in a way that it had not within the living memory of the Genii. Those on the surface died; those underground survived, or nearly all. In the confusion, there were a handful of casualties that were not discovered until almost a year later - outliers, who lived outside of the immediate boundaries of the city. Upon their discovery, many of the more traditional Genii took the deaths as a sign of things to come, though none could agree upon what that was.
It was the day Ladon Radim proclaimed himself Chancellor of the Genii that the last bird died, a victim of neglect in the wake of its keepers deaths. One year later, to the day, Acastus Kolya died with the sound of birdsong in his ears, on a planet without a single man-made cave.
~ Finis ~
Author:
Rating: PG
Author's Note: Um, so this didn't go at all where I had expected it to. I am very interested to hear what anyone thinks of it. It's a look at an aspect of the Genii life that I'm not sure anyone has poked at, yet, as well as an unexpected look into Kolya's motivations.
ETA: Mild correlation with Irresponsible, but nothing major and certainly nothing you'll recognize if you haven't seen the ep (which I haven't; I was informed second-hand).
For as long as anyone can remember, the Genii have lived underground. They may walk in the sunshine on those days when the Ring of the Ancestors awakens, but they live underground. It is where they laugh, and sing, and truly smile. When they smile at all, that is, which isn't often.
They live underground, because theirs is a legacy of betrayal that stretches back more than ten thousand years. Back to the day when the message came from the Ancestors that help would not be arriving as promised. The Genii were too few, the Ancestors said, and scattered between too many worlds to defend effectively; the resources for the war would be better used elsewhere. So the Genii did what they did best, and persevered. For their efforts, they were very nearly extinguished.
The pattern was repeated again and again over the years - first the Shinaak, then the Hoffans, and by the time the Kitar withdrew their promised allegiance, the Genii had ceased to be surprised. Alliances were made to be broken; this was the the truth that the Genii learned at the cost of countless lives.
When the Athosians appeared through the Ring of the Ancestors, the Genii offered nothing but what could be seen upon the surface. They spoke not about resisting the Wraith or the city that they struggled to rebuild deep within the heart of their world and the hundreds who sheltered there while they worked. The Athosians seemed content with that; they were a simple people themselves, by all appearances, and asked for nothing more than Tava beans in exchange for very high quality leathers. In time, relations between the two cultures progressed to something approaching 'friendly, but distant', and all was as well as could be in a galaxy ruled by the Wraith.
Underground, the Genii used the new leather to make better gloves for the workers who tunneled ever further to expand the hidden city. For the welders who worked to strengthen the supports that had failed one or ten or two hundred years before. A year after the next major culling hit, the city was deemed finished and the power levels sufficient to support the current population. The survivors flocked to the safety represented by walls of stone and metal, glad of something that could once again be called their own. In keeping with the need for secrecy, every citizen would serve a spell on the surface. They would grow the food that was needed to feed those below, and they would maintain the image that had been so painstakingly crafted.
There was one family who did not set foot upon the surface, tied instead to the rock in a way that few could understand. They were the bird keepers, those who tended the small lives that insured so many others. A strange breed of exile within their own society, they knew not the light of the sun or the touch of the stars; their lives were contained within the flicker of torches, the songs of the birds, and the endless prayers that the songs never stop. The birds were, like the Genii people themselves, descendants of survivors who had crawled from the rubble of that first horrific culling. They, like their ancestors, stood guard over their human keepers in the endless black of the tunnels and never complained.
Every once in a while, one of them would return to the city looking for a spouse, and decide to remain among the people that they guarded so fiercely from such a distance. The last to take the journey to the city was a boy named Acastus.
Marked as an outsider by the paleness of his skin, he struggled desperately to find a place in the light of the deep city, in that strange mixture of above and below. When his turn on the surface came, it was marked by pain as his skin adapted to the harsh light of the sun, but he survived it just as he had survived the cave-ins that struck in the outer tunnels. Despite his status as outsider-within, he toughened and progressed well through the ranks of leadership; soon enough, the lessons of allegiance and betrayal flowed within his veins as surely as did the blood of the keepers.
An unspoken rule amongst the Genii is that the keepers do not leave their world. A few may leave the tunnels - all leave for a time, to seek spouses, but most for no more than a few months - but none may leave the safety of the homeworld. It is deemed bad luck, for the secrets of the birds to venture beyond the Ring of the Ancestors. By the time he became a leader within the military, Acastus Kolya's past as a keeper had been all but forgotten, and no one questioned his right to lead a strike team after those who had inevitably betrayed them.
Then came the culling, and the earth trembled and shook in a way that it had not within the living memory of the Genii. Those on the surface died; those underground survived, or nearly all. In the confusion, there were a handful of casualties that were not discovered until almost a year later - outliers, who lived outside of the immediate boundaries of the city. Upon their discovery, many of the more traditional Genii took the deaths as a sign of things to come, though none could agree upon what that was.
It was the day Ladon Radim proclaimed himself Chancellor of the Genii that the last bird died, a victim of neglect in the wake of its keepers deaths. One year later, to the day, Acastus Kolya died with the sound of birdsong in his ears, on a planet without a single man-made cave.
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Date: 2007-03-15 02:07 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-15 02:09 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-15 02:47 am (UTC)Oops, is there a missing word (of) in this? - "a victim of neglect in the wake its keepers deaths."
Sorry I missed you online! Was taking a break to watch an episode of The Wild Wild West with
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Date: 2007-03-15 03:00 am (UTC)Dude, I have a hard time not continuing with backstory, once I've established it, so I'm sure it will crop up again. And in regards to Kolya, he always had that flavor of an "in" outsider, you know? The Genii fascinate me, because they're a prime example of the difference in basic morals between Pegasus and Earth. I like playing with them, looking at hows and whys and where certain practices might have come from. And, you know, any group that has been working underground for any prolonged period of time has had to use some kind of poison gas detection. Canaries were the bird of choice in the coal mines; I can't believe the Genii didn't have something similar. As the generations passed, what was once a practical mechanism became ritualized.
RE: The birds themselves. There were three interpretations of the 'symbolic' or 'prophetic' meaning of the death of the birds:
1. It was a sign that the Genii would soon fall in the wake of their guardians (see also: Ravens & the Tower of London).
2. It was a sign that the old ways were dying.
3. The birds had died because they were no longer needed, and the Genii would soon walk in the sunlight again without fear.
No worries. I'm sure we shall run into each other ^_^
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Date: 2007-03-15 03:12 am (UTC)ladyholder
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Date: 2007-03-15 04:15 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-15 04:54 am (UTC)Ladyholder
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Date: 2007-03-15 04:56 am (UTC)*Realizes what time it is and runs screaming for her bed*
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Date: 2007-03-15 05:36 am (UTC)Ladyholder
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Date: 2007-03-18 12:39 am (UTC)I hate mornings.
Hate working the 0700 shift even more, never mind having to get up before classes to finish baking things. I mean, I like baking, I just don't like the dragging my ass out of bed early so that it's warm when I bring it in.
*Keels over dead with exhaustion*
I'm also sleeping really badly this weekend, and over-exhausted from being sick, so I haven't been online at all since Thursday morning for about 10 minutes. Sorry! I really wanted to do some writing, too.
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Date: 2007-03-15 06:22 am (UTC)Check your tags, 'cause right know I'm pretty ticked
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Date: 2007-03-15 11:56 am (UTC)I had the same thing with "The Questioning of John Sheppard" - there was something alluded to in a future episode which I happened to also use in my piece, but the two weren't meant to dovetail, and it was something I'd been considering / sorting out for a while before it was ever mentioned as a spoiler (I haven't seen the referenced episode, either - haven't gotten around to seeing most of the second half of season 3, between one thing and another. Echoes and the two Returns are the only episodes I've seen).
I did it with "Bridges You Cross" - written before Return 2 aired anywhere, correctly predicting how the situation with the Asurans would resolve. It's not a spoiler if you're hypothesizing (also? I commonly end fics with glimpses into the future; several of them have included deaths. As far as I know, most of the people I've written "dead" are still alive and kicking. I'll modify my advert tags, but I think you're going off a bit strong on something that wasn't a spoiler to the best of my knowledge. If I happened to coincide with future canon, that's not actually my fault.
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Date: 2007-03-15 05:05 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-15 10:28 pm (UTC)Hope your day's going better.
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Date: 2007-03-15 05:17 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-15 10:37 pm (UTC)Glad it worked regardless, though.
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Date: 2007-03-16 01:03 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-16 05:28 pm (UTC)The thing is, after 500 years the birds became symbolic more than functional - there was no new digging going on, so there was a very low likelihood of gas leaks or other problematic situations. *G*
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Date: 2007-03-16 05:32 pm (UTC)(no subject)
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Date: 2007-03-16 05:49 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-15 11:51 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-16 05:46 pm (UTC)And, you know, there's just so much room to play.
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Date: 2007-03-16 01:23 am (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-16 05:48 pm (UTC)*Waits with baited breath for you to become more coherent*
I look forward to your comments ^_^
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Date: 2007-03-16 07:30 pm (UTC)(no subject)
Date: 2007-03-18 12:41 am (UTC)I'm sure this isn't the last you'll see about the birds - once I come up with an idea, it was a way of weaseling into other areas of my life/fiction/etc.
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Date: 2007-03-26 04:39 am (UTC)(I'd have responded earlier, but I was putting this off until it wouldn't influence mine.)
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Date: 2007-03-26 08:32 pm (UTC)I'm glad that you liked this; it wasn't at all what I'd intended when I first came up with the concept, but I adore it just the same ^_^
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Date: 2007-03-27 06:23 pm (UTC)With the Genii, I have trouble... it makes no sense (save for the standpoint of familiar actors) for the publicly acknowledged leader of Big Shiny Target to also be the leader of The Whole Shebang. My best guess as to explaining this is that there was some sort of power play behind the scenes in "Underground," where Cowan sped up his timetable for moving to supreme power with the arguments of C-4, airpower, and If You Hadn't Been Going So Slowly We'd Have Blown Them Up Before They Woke. If that went through before the disastrous mission to the hive, he'd almost have had to transfer all blame to the Atlanteans in order to avoid being as swiftly deposed; and assigning Kolya to the Atlantis invasion would have been a double-edged sword that wound up giving him the worst of both worlds, even with the silver lining of a guaranteed scapegoat.
//it wasn't at all what I'd intended when I first came up with the concept, but I adore it just the same//
I love it when that happens; those are often the best stories.
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Date: 2007-03-27 09:54 pm (UTC)They really, really are.
And yeah, your thoughts on the Genii make sense (you often do). To quote John Sheppard in "One Life to Ascend To" by
Sometimes, it's just easier that way (although I always end up going back later and hashing it out anyway, but I let it simmer a while). The Genii just managed to get royally screwed this time around, between the unexpected awakening, the Cowen/Kolya/Atlantis mess, the Radim mess, the Radiation poisoning, etc...
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Date: 2007-03-27 10:42 pm (UTC)ARGH.
Date: 2007-03-27 10:43 pm (UTC)(I do actually know how to spell.)
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Date: 2007-03-27 11:25 pm (UTC)Look at the Tokugawa Era and the effects of Perry's arrival - that's a great parallel to the Genii, I think.
Now the adaptation begins, and we can only hope that it won't end in tragedy.
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Date: 2007-03-28 04:08 am (UTC)But innovation forced on a static society has happened enough times in the history of the Earth that we could probably each think of seven more parallels while we were at it. ^_^
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